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megakyle777 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/4/2011 2:01:34)

Hi there Jae! Just to let you know, you are in the second part of my story.




Clown the Jester -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/4/2011 11:05:32)

Gray Silhouette says he's going to be altering Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. to fit in the events that occured yesterday. Heh heh heh. A wise move. That was some real fun.




megakyle777 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/4/2011 11:15:18)

What did I miss? Lousy differing timezones...




Arachnid -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/4/2011 11:21:08)

@Clown
quote:

“AREN’T THEY JUST PEACHIE?” the Harlequin exclaimed.

XD
That made me laugh!

~Lady Zafara




Clown the Jester -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/4/2011 12:53:47)

Heh heh heh. Thanks Arachnid. I love the way I talk. Fun on the Bun.



Oh Dealer...what did you miss. Hm....heh heh heh...not much not much. Gray Silhouette has developed a way to kill all Smashers. Heh heh heh.




Jae10 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/5/2011 18:11:48)

< Epilogue. Great stories btw! :3




Celestin123 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/5/2011 18:34:48)

@Jae: I loved the epilogue Jae!xP




silver knight -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/5/2011 18:49:18)

@Jae just started reading it, and i like it. haven't reached the end yet though.



Here's the prologue to my new story.




delta blitz -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/5/2011 19:35:50)

@Jae: I have began writing a new story,so I ask that you comment please. Your epilouge is awesome as expected,I seriously think that your story beats my first one.




Drakkoniss -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/5/2011 20:24:57)

Interesting, Clown... Makes me think I might not have to get rid of us for more than 5 years, now...

YES!!!!!!! HUZZAH, THE EPILOGUE, AFTER ALL THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




djm1997 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/6/2011 12:59:29)

I think that they should make a Hero vs Evil plot.
I don't have the plot for the Evil, but here is my good plot. They do however merge, so they only have to come up with the beginning of the evil plot, since I have the end.
(Each chapter is released in one week)


Prologue:
(This is a prologue for heroes. Villains have the quests first and then just a short cutscene showing the city fall.)
There is an existing species of humans who live in the heavens called Guardian Angels who basically protect the heavens. However one day the angels' city of Auraris plummets to the ground and lands near Liberty City. Note that this is the only city of the angels, not one of many. Then your hero goes to investigate the crash. He finds the angels all in great desperation of help. Here you meet an angel named Aris who guides you through the storyline. He is the basic quest giver if you’re good. If you’re evil there will be a new character introduced named the evil chancellor.
(This should all be in the intro cutscene of week one along with chapter one)
(Good Plot is blue text, Evil Plot is red text, Black is both)

Chapter 1:
Aris tells you that you should search the Auraris Mechanics room. He explains to you that this is where all the mechanics for keeping the city in the sky is. There you find out that the power mechanism has been low on battery. This is not an ordinary battery. This is like a light matter which is fueled by people's nice actions. You then find out that this has been low because all the people in Liberty City have unexpectedly started being mean for some reason.
The evil chancellor tells you to go receive some precious metal some deep inside a mine outside Liberty city. You go and fetch this special metal which he uses to craft this machine. Only now do you discover about this machine. He then uses this machine, and then you watch the cutscene of Auraris falling.

Chapter 2:
Aris has you go investigate Skulldeep for any evidence, just purely do to them being evil. Here you have to fight/quest your way into the Evil Chancellor's room where he tells you that Super Death has made a magic machine which he has been using to turn more heroes into villains.
The evil chancellor tells you that this was only a prototype and tells you to go fetch light energy from some guardian angels in Auraris. Here you take it and give it to the evil chancellor to power up the machine.


Chapter 3:
You confront death after fighting through many of his minions. And he tells you that the Evil Chancellor was actually the one using this machine.

You go to Super Death and persuade him to join your team, he however says no tells you he doesn’t want to interfere.


Chapter 4:
Heroes go back to Skulldeep with Super Death and you re-confront the chancellor where he now admits it. However he then unveils his machine and tells the heroes how it is finally ready and how he was framing death just to sidetrack the heroes while the villians finished it. He then uses his machine to turn Super Death evil. (not shadow evil, but villain) Then there is Herosmash's first war. (yeah!) However this one is not Player vs. Comp, but it is Player vs. Player. Not direct, however the meters will be countering each other. The heroes will kill villains for medals, and the villains will kill Guardian Angels.

Chapter 5:
The players will get to fight their bosses. The good guys fight Super Death, while the bad guys fight a Strong Guardian Angel Warrior. (Help me think of a different evil boss!)
If Good wins: They destroy the machine and the Chancellor admits defeat.

If Evil wins: The machine backfires and destroys itself.

Ending regardless of win: The villians admit defeat and help the Guardian Angels restore balance once they are told how Liberty City needs a constant balance of good and evil.

(Ending might need some work.)
Please look at this and tell me what you think.
This is not my final copy. Later I am going to draw up the characters. (Evil Chancellor, Aris, Guardian Angels, Super Death Evil Mode, etc.)




delta blitz -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/7/2011 19:55:19)

Chapter 22 and 23 of Called Hero and Chosen one is done so check them out and comment.(that means you Drakkoniss <.<)




Sir Night -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/8/2011 0:53:43)

Chapter 2 of my story is done.

Discuss it here.




Clown the Jester -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/9/2011 14:56:44)

Egads I'm smart! I think I may know what the final trial of Death is.


Ok lets recape.


1st trial...Volcano with lava monsters rise out from the ground.

2nd. A Meteor with slime monsters fall from the sky.


The first two have the exact opposite tests occur.



3rd: We travel to the future where our city is no more.


4th. Whatever it is must take place in the past. Where our city has not been built or it is very new.


Now what event in the past before SuperCity do we know of? Oh yes...heh heh heh...


Pandora's and the Foe's legendary fight.


Makes sense if ya think about it.








Shadowlord9k -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/9/2011 16:24:08)

Clown: Or it could even be in the Ice Age.




delta blitz -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/9/2011 16:44:13)

@clown: You being smart is a double negative due to the fact that geniusness and insanity is on the same wavelength. But anyway I must disagree by saying I think us hero,villains and (what ever clown is) will be battling death himself to show him our power.




Jae10 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/10/2011 14:28:17)

@ djm1997: That's very well thought out string of story quests. I like the idea of an Evil Chancellor. Why? Because it reminds me so much of Stars Wars - Before he was an evil emperor, Palpatine was an evil chancellor, right? But anyway, it's a marvelous idea.^^

@ Clown: Interesting concept. It's been true so far, so the 4th trial being about the past makes perfectly good sense. Not exactly sure if the past event would be particularly centered around the Pandora/Foe legend, but that would most definitely be an awesome surprise if it did!

@ Shadow: Lol, why the Ice Age?

< I'm tempted to make a storyline suggestion just for kicks. But, I have a feeling the current storylines already implemented in Hero Smash are effectively keeping AE team quite busy.^^


~Hm, I wonder what THIS is...~




Shadowlord9k -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/10/2011 15:33:19)

Jae: Portal is covered in snow. Ice Age had a lot of snow. Great stories by the way.




Clown the Jester -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/10/2011 15:50:09)

I did not think of that Shadowlord9k...hm...intresting thought.



Oh by the way. A bunch of people say they didn't know I had my 3rd chapter of The Good, The Bad, And The Chaos


So heres a link in case ya didn't know.


The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos


Oh Jae. Read first chapter of Legacy. Epic.




Celestin123 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/10/2011 15:56:32)

Gosh, I'm really behind on everyone's stories, Jae I just read your first chapter and I think it's
great! I still need to read Sir Night's story though...... and I already read Clown's third chapter, and I thought it
was great! Poor Velmur..... Edit~ Great Story, Sir Night! I'll comment now.....




delta blitz -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/10/2011 18:52:19)

@clown and Jae: I decided to adopt some of you guys writing style for my next story.(The double spacing between sentances) hmm...maybe I'll just double space between paragraphs instead.




Jae10 -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/11/2011 12:20:12)

^
What you write seems to flow together just fine the way it is, but, if ya wanna change the format that's your choice. Nothing changes the fact that the stories are still great! :D

In general: Ohhhh, Ice Age huh? It's making more sense now lol

< Omg, I have finger cramps >.<'




delta blitz -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/11/2011 18:24:37)

@jae:Thx for the comment but some of my readers have complained about how hard it is to read a block of sentances so for my next story,I've decided to show them I was listening(and plus it might get more people to comment this time x3). Speaking of commenting I still await yours Jae.......when you have the time to. I also wouldn't mind a few from clown too...
Climbing a mountain is child's play when you can fly.....x3 but digging into it is another thing entirely.




star screamer -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/11/2011 23:43:48)

who remembers when you could farm rep off of the park missions when
davinci and demolicious were in mainstreeteast?

















Watziname WAT -> RE: =HS= Storyline Discussion Thread (8/11/2011 23:52:14)

Yeah..
What about it?




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