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A Dreamer -> (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 19:56:14)
Post your comments below, story is here: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=19243051 PREVIOUS POSTS- taken down because they were in the story itself. quote: ORIGINAL: Velmus: I liked it! Very good. And good grammar, a thing I love in stories. =P Keep writing! I see GREAT potential in this story if ya keep practicing. quote: ORGINAL: Carly9467 LOL Mah Hotbuddeh has a girlfrend? Woot! You go girl!:D Lol nice you got detention. Canz i be in diz? :o quote: ORIGINAL: Carly9467 Make meh get captured by ur dad too? :o Taht be awesomesauce quote: ORIGINAL: Carly9467 xD quote: ORIGINAL: UnityDestroyer This is very good i see more and more potential to your plots. quote: ORIGINAL: Watzinname WAT AWOSOME story :D Meh,you won't be able to control MY dreams though. My mind and body is surrounded by a repellent kind of sheild. Poison,mind control,hypnosis,dream control,etc,doesn't have an effect on me so :P quote: ORIGINAL: Sir Night Very good story! I like it. I also like that you're writing it to give us a good story, rather than just to tell everyone how OP and unbeatable you are. quote: ORIGINAL: Velmur That potential I mentioned earlier? It isn't potential anymore. It's just plain GOOD WRITING! Very good story, please don't penetrate my mind, kthnxbai. quote: ORIGINAL: Carly9467 Dude, you got mah name wrong xD It's KALI!

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:00:41)
She was in my underwear? e.o...hopefully had a shirt on.. and Yeah, i would badger you fer cake :)

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:02:13)
whatever you wear to sleep you were wearing X3 feel bettar?

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:05:31)
Those shorts that go above your knees and a baggy t-shirt :3

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:08:46)
okay XD it feels awkward with u telling we what you're wearing to bed O_o

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:10:17)
yeah...at least not in mah underwear tho xD

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:12:32)
lolz, yah XD that'd have extra awkward X3 its like ordering a salad dinner at a resturant, and getting a side salad, except with awkward. i feel like I'm over-explaining XD

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:14:18)
xD I don't eat salad at pizza places...Just Pizza n Breadsticks...Sometimes wings..Mmmmm>:D

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:15:50)
lolz, i was talking about regular resturants, but it applies there too, and i dun like wings ;o but i loves breadsticks

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/7/2011 23:18:17)
YOUR MAD WOMAN :O I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DUN LIKE WINGS:OOOO Lol i don't get salad...anywhere unless theres really nothing else i like...which isn't usual >:3

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 0:28:36)
i dunt eat wings, i a veggie train, remember?

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 0:33:20)
Lol i could NOT handle bein a veggi xD I LOVE my Steak/Chicken/Ribs >:3

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 0:39:35)
Lolz,its not as hard as people think :P but then, i never really liked the taste too much, either, so it's different for me.

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 0:43:00)
xD I live off of meat xD i don't like veggies at all. The only good things i like are: bananas, Blackberries, Strawberries, Watermelon, Corn, Grapes, Grapejuice, Water(NOT TAP WATER x3), Milk (i dont like it that much but it's better than most things) Ice, cereal (Depends on cereal.), crackers...and i think that's it xD

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 1:20:35)
does u like mushrooms? because that's about 40% of my diet right there XD

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 1:30:28)
No but i like potatoes n bagels xD

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 1:40:15)
lolz, love potatoes, and bagels r uber-tasty XD

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 1:42:39)
ikr:D

A Dreamer -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 1:50:13)
NEW CHAPTER :D

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (7/8/2011 10:56:58)
WEWT EDIT LOL i haz a sister

Jae10 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (8/15/2011 18:16:00)
< Read it and liked it! So Dreamer is a telepath right and you can enter dreams? That's an extremely epic power! I am pretty ecstatic that there are more psychic Smashers out there than I thought. If you weren't in Clown's Chaos Carnival I would readily invite you to be a Mindbender - we're basically good Smashers with varying mental abilities, lol. But anyway, lovely background info X3

Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) A Dreamer's backstory (8/21/2011 14:50:41)
Wow, sorry that I haven't commented until now, I've been busy. Anyways, this was a really good story, I find it interesting how a normal boy came to be one of the Chaos carnival's most important members. I also like how your not one of those people who make your stories like this: "Dreamer destroyed all 5,000 of the soldiers minds and killed 50 soldiers with one punch! He then saved everyone and took over the chaos carnival!". That actually happens a lot more than you'd think>.>. Anyways, can't wait to see how your other story goes!

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