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Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/2/2012 19:25:55)

Exactly. A story needs at least a basic plot to follow, or it will mess up the entire story.



Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/2/2012 20:17:42)

I have a question? When did the fact that Zafara only had one angel-esque wing get stated? So far as I know, only one wing was confirmed (she did this in commentary, even though in the chapter there was room for interperatation), but nothing was said to indicate that she didn't have another on the other side, in her chapter...

I can't believe the chapter number has boosted so much in such a short time... I'm maybe halfway through it, and I haven't even taken that long of a time not reading it... <.<



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/4/2012 16:09:52)

Just wrote a chapter! Let me know what you think!



Doom Desirer -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/4/2012 17:26:34)

Nice chapter. I like how you said something about the voidrix blood in your chapter. To be honest, I never expected that alliance, thought it is understandable.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/4/2012 20:36:26)

Thanks. Pure Darkness is actually a very neutral ability. It can be aligned with anyone.



Zeuzt -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 6:28:51)

Hey guys

I've been reading your chapters and I know there should be like a story or something

Like we know they want to destroy and stuff but I don't know there's no plot just attacks and more recruits just saying




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 12:31:32)

Zuest: There is a plot. This is only the beginning.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 12:55:12)

quote:

Zuest: There is a plot. This is only the beginning.


It's just that, most stories don't take 30 chapters to get a plot in.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 13:20:58)

OC: and most collaborations don't have people go and write their own chapters on a whim.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 13:25:12)

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OC: and most collaborations don't have people go and write their own chapters on a whim.


Maybe we should have a rule so that people can't do that.



Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 13:41:39)

Or at least establish what's going to happen next. This doesn't seem to be a collab; it's more like a free-for-all.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 14:05:20)

We need actual communication between the writers, so we can get more done in less time.



delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 14:44:31)

Hmm...interesting *places his left fist under his chin to represent his signiture thinking position* I agree with shadow you guys need some organization or rather get eachother emails(thats what clown and grey did when they were making C and T) so that you guys can send ideas between eachother (or send it to clown). I believe that will help completely close any gaps in the story.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:04:54)

Here, I made a Xat Chat Room so we can discuss things about this collab and other collaborations afterwards.



Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:09:23)

O_o Did anybody else see that? David just agreed with Shadow!
And good idea, guys.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:12:02)

Jessa: He did something smart for once. I dislike the sharing E-mails idea, and the chatroom relies on us all being there at once.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:15:06)

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I dislike the sharing E-mails idea, and the chatroom relies on us all being there at once.


Then what else? I made that chatroom for no reason then.



Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:18:30)

What about pm's? Or even this topic, using spoiler tags.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 15:19:17)

PM's work.



Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 17:01:44)

Don't worry guys I'll be moving the plot forward by tomorrow...just finishing the chapter...soon we'll have the real show on the road....now that we're all ready, I declare Opening part done...next comes the complication and climax....and then....


La Fin...and all will be at an end.


HOO HOO HOO HOO HOO HA HA HA!



Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 17:15:21)

Wow, 30 pages just for the opening... That's got to be a new record. Looking forward to the new chapter. Still, a plot needs to be established. I think so far it's like this...

•Smashers all over the city are captured by the Order.
•The Order tries to destroy/kill the city.

That's not really much.



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 19:48:31)

quote:

•Smashers all over the city are captured by the Order.
•The Order tries to destroy/kill the city.


Overcast also joins the Brotherhood, but my character isn't important enough I guess...not to sound whiny...



Jessa K -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/6/2012 22:13:47)

*Captured/join

Still not much of a plot...



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/7/2012 2:10:22)

Clown: Good to hear, I'm looking forward to it.
Jessa: Technically entire books can be "the opening".



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (4/9/2012 10:54:29)

Looks like Clown is late with the new chap. Though that`s ok his chaps are worth the wait.



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