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hict98 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 12:36:22)

@Seth I don't know what to say aside from this was just simply amazing. I mean I loved it and have to say that you are by far one of the best action writers here so I can't wait for the actual action. Honestly though I don't know what to say about this except for that I loved it. Fantastic job.
Oh and I refuse to read that spoiler.

Once again guys I just need one more vote and I can continue with my story. Just pm me saying who your first, second, and third favorite are.

@Kors Excellent with plenty of nice "on the edge of my seat" action. I was kind of surprised with how short this chapter was compared to the rest of your chapters. I mean it was still longer than most other's chapters, but still the size of one of your subchapters. All in all though I liked it. Well done.



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 16:59:36)

Will have a new chapter up soon enough!!

Here we go:

Chapter Seven: Beasts and Battle Brilliance




hict98 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 17:10:50)

@tommy2468 Umm you wrote chapter eight in your story.



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 17:14:20)

Whoops. Correcting post now, thanks Hict

Double whoops XD I changed my post instead of the story. It is meant to be chapter seven!



popinloopy -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 17:54:15)

@tommy
Well then. Your story, as always, has managed to make me feel for the characters. Poor Seth...



UnderSoul -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 18:11:37)

I think that soon I shall start my story. After all, what better way to defend Paxia from Xov than a katana that shoots paint? However, it can not be started at the moment, but at least everyone has something to look forward to.

@0Neo Most entertaining so far... I look forward to more.



kors -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 18:15:14)

Ah! US welcome to the insane(ly creative) asylum we have built for ourselves![;)] Hopefully yours will be just as awesome as everyone elses!

Edit: and you know what? We are missing only 3 people from the Paladin vs Necromancer war story group. Just missing hellblade124, Whiteknight and deathsnake1 and we have all of our group!



flashbang -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 20:52:24)

Yay! US is finally back!

@ss
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first he's a Bayleaf, now he's a Sceptile.


Pokemon reference.

Also, Salem may or may not be the one to do the MLP:FIM thing.



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 22:10:36)

Thank you Undersoul, I'll try to live up to expectations and I'll be eager to read yours when you have the time to write.

@tommy2468 I can't describe the awe of this chapter. The emotion, the fighting, (the fact that you knew I love both the clan of earth and twin daggers :P) and above everything....the crimson glory. I have to say, that is a terrific ending able to move readers......I'll really have to do something good on my next chapter to try to equal this. All in all, a marvelous work.



hict98 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/27/2013 23:43:35)

@Tommy Bravo. Just bravo. I mean you balanced action and story all together in this chapter. You showed the teamwork and cooperation that one clan has with itself and how the clans work together then in a grande finale gave Seth a death that he should be proud to have. I'm just curious if you had the idea of giving Seth a fantastic and worthy death or if I somewhat inspire it for you. Either way it was just simply fantastic. In fact it has inspired me to give everyone in my story that is going to die a glorious death. Oh and yes there will be many more deaths.



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 1:45:31)

@tommy really loved this chapter lots of action that keeps you really interested an poor seth it really isn't a happy end foor him isn't it



dragonfire1423 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 2:49:27)

@Flash: Oh dear god no...

@Tommy: I'm speechless as always~

Undersoul! How kind of you to once again join us *bows* Though, *stops bowing* you will find no safe place to hide here, so watch you back, for what it's worth... That said, WELCOME! (^w^)

Also, Imma start school soon, so while I may update I'll rarely be able to read through some of your stories. I'll try my best, but again, outta time for now.

BACK TO THE GOOD NEWS~! I'm working on the next chapter. I think it will either be the conclusion or something close to it. Just know it's not a happy ending, but they all go out with a fiery bang. Now, back to work for me *Puts on "Simon the Driller Goggles"*



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 4:35:43)

@Tommy: AS much as I hate too see you've killed of my character, I loved the chapter. Amazing emotion and clarity while describing the scenario, and an amazing finale. It would be a death, any warrior would be proud of!



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 4:37:34)

Hict I was going to just leave Seth until the end and have him die of something more boring, but I thought you were right. So I gave him a big hoo haa XD

And don't take this personally ss when you read it. This isn't going to be a story that you will tell who will live and die (at least I hope so)



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 7:13:33)

^Actually, I just find it a bit ironic considering I've cut of his arm in my story :|

Either way, Chapter 9: Fall of the Behemoth Part 1 is up! ENJOY! :)



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 7:21:44)

@ss just read it and it looks like your character keeps having a hard time lately huh :) but anyway cant wait to see madara fight because by the way things sound it should be an epic fight



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 11:22:29)

@ss2195 it was a great fight, the type you see in good battle scenes. I am expecting an epic battle for your next chapter, this "power of the Hydra" you describe sounds quite good.



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 11:36:21)

@Darksaber and 0Neo: Glad you liked it, but you're gonna have to wait for.some time since the next.chapter will focus on Abaraa, Storm, Hikari and Adrians fight against Vayyder n Morhisson, which may take up to two parts to finsih since the.timeline is back on track.

Oh and think of the Hydras seal release and Hydra regen as inherited family cursemarks!



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 11:52:52)

I'm curious to see what the Hydra Seal fully does. It has regenerative power, but will Seth grow two hands from the one that was cut off? XD



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 12:38:00)

Well, one question... in the original Naruto arcs, not Shippuden... What happens to Sasuke when he activates the Orouchimaru's curse seal? Well, that's the Hydra's seal release for you.

Speaking of Hydra's regen, @Tommy2468 : Unfortunately no he wont :(

Think more Wolverine and kakuza(Hidan's partner)





tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 13:59:50)

Well it drew out his chakra and forced him to rely on the seal which gave huge power. But it took away his will and his mind. If he were to rely on it too much he would become like the Sound Four and would have no control. He would become another minion.

If that is the case, what would happen to Seth, or even Xage seeing as he is the one using it? Is the Hydra Curse something that has been put into them by someone evil? Or is it a genetic thing?

If it is the latter then I will be interested to see what would happen if they were to use it too much. I would assume they would gain massive power potential, but would become extremely weak afterwards nearing the point of death.

But Kakuza didn't really have regeneration. He could take out a person's heart but that just gave him their abilities and gave him extra life. Hidan was the one who was technically immortal (to the point that he had his head cut off. But it was sewn back on by Kakuza)

If it is like Kakuza will Seth cut someone else's hand off for himself? And if it's like Hidan, is he capable of sewing it back on?

So many questions for your story Seth and I like that there are all these mysteries that have yet to be solved [:)] Can't wait to see your upcoming chapters!



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 14:14:25)

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Well it drew out his chakra and forced him to rely on the seal which gave huge power. But it took away his will and his mind. If he were to rely on it too much he would become like the Sound Four and would have no control. He would become another minion.


Correct, it gives the user immense power, and clouds the sense of judgement. When the seal recedes, the user is left devoid of energy. In most situations, new nusers cannot activate it more than once a day, without it proving fatal.

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If that is the case, what would happen to Seth, or even Xage seeing as he is the one using it? Is the Hydra Curse something that has been put into them by someone evil? Or is it a genetic thing?


You're second guess is correct to an extent, the real reason being the one I will provide in the story.

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But Kakuza didn't really have regeneration. He could take out a person's heart but that just gave him their abilities and gave him extra life. Hidan was the one who was technically immortal (to the point that he had his head cut off. But it was sewn back on by Kakuza)

If it is like Kakuza will Seth cut someone else's hand off for himself? And if it's like Hidan, is he capable of sewing it back on?


Well, Seth is immortal to an extent, a benefit of being from the Hydra Family.. the only way to kill him being <>
Well, He can.... i think i'll leave some of the mystery so you can decide which is which!



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 14:37:50)

I think I would prefer it if he was like Hidan. The Hydra Seal would make him immortal the same way the Hidan's religion does (I really hope this isn't starting to sound like a Naruto discussion XD)

Whereas if he were to take the hearts of others (or something similar) it would be more sinister and evil. Plus it wouldn't make sense considering the Hydra's abilities.

The immortality would be more of a natural thing, rather than something that Seth had discovered how to do.



battlemaster25 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 15:05:16)

Chapter VII has just been posted. Don't you just love excessive build-up? Because I do.



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/28/2013 21:35:58)

@battlemaster25 I sure do to, the tension seems good but I find it odd you decided to get into the actual war at this point....or is it not going to be the real war despite being called the final battle?

Seth, Hikari, you guys are going off-topic. Please stop now before someone with real authority comes here and warns us.



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