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Beck -> RE: Blackshock's menagerie (12/31/2013 0:37:20)
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Nice Gallery! But since these things are meant for critiques as well as general admiration (of which you shouldn't doubt I have for you), so here goes!
Mimic's lines are about 80% for me; of special note is the perspective on the treasure chest. The inner box on the side doesn't like up right and it's throwing me off xD
Plague Warden - 90% Pretty good! Basic shading, but it works well. The left side of his face seems a bit stretched out though (know what I mean?), skews it a bit.
Steelbeast Dragon - A nice sophisticated concept! (no % cus it's a concept sketch xD) Things I would fix: his right front limb seems to be bent awkwardly like he has a dislocated shoulder so I'd adduct it a bit. Also, I'd give him more of a hip/hump cus that spine just looks weirdly dipped to me.
Steelbeast charger - Awesome! He looks like something out of a prehistoric diorama, only armored xD I've got nothing useful to add about this one, only a request that you color it when you're able to, cus it looks cool.
Beetlekin Knight - very nice! The legs are positioned a bit weird though; they seem too close together?
Dracofiend - this looks like an older sketch to be honest. I think the head is a bit out of position, and he should have a bit wider hip. And, the legs are spaced weird; they're a bit too close together so he looks off balance and the right leg looks a bit crooked.
Fleshpuppet - ooooh neat concept! Is he available for assistance in surgeries? xD Once again, stance is weird, but in this case I think it's ok for him to be walking funny.
Reapershade - looks like she'd fit right into Mechquest, actually. The pose is pretty good, but the hands look a bit small.
Earth Fairy Evo - nice edit job! 90%, cus you're almost but not quite matching the OS shading style, and your eyes are weirding me out.
the two bug warrior concepts are awesome, though I prefer the scorpion one more cus that pose looks pretty much perfect.
Steelbeast Shredder may be one of my favorites in your gallery! Great concept. Why aren't you using these for mechquest, I wonder? xD Critiques: its right arm seems a bit too close to the body, and the right foot looks like he's recoiling from stepping on a nail.
Doctor Strangeclaw - looks like something out of a Disney movie! Cool concept, though simplistic on the shading, especially noticeable on her mane.
Reaper's Heart - looks like an AQW weapon concept, though pretty good.
I like the Frostbat veteran better than Master, because that pose is more actiony and pretty perfect xD
And you know my thoughts on your dinos, considering I did fanart of them before.
Annnnnd done! Very nice gallery overall~
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