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3/13/2011 9:05:38   
Acient J
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Ruin's Quest Chain
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3/13/2011 22:28:42   
Mordred
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You made a typo in Sek Duat's name the first time you mention him. :P

I like this, but the dialogue seems really flat and lack-luster to me. It feels like: "Hey, go do this, and come back."; "Oh, you're back. Now do this for me."; "I;ve been on your side the whole time. Forgive me!" It seems really one-sided on the character's part, and Ruin isn't very dynamic either. Those're my thoughts on this.
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