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11/23/2011 17:52:09   
Shadowlight1
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I decided to write a fanfic about my HS character, please tell me what you think. I'll add more chapters if it's good.

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=19827596&mpage=1&key=�
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11/24/2011 18:24:52   
Drakkoniss
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Let me guess, you got your powers from dark matter wells that only released themselves during a solar eclipse, found deep in the moon?

I like this story. It seems like it won't have any of our characters, but that's fine, and could actually improve the feel of the story, anyway.

It has quite a bit of potential indeed... and I like your writing style.
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11/30/2011 17:50:37   
Shadowlight1
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I added the next chapter to my story, it's longer, but I'm not very experienced as a writer yet. I would appreciate some feedback.
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12/1/2011 15:47:56   
Kinzdor
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Enjoyable story few typos here and there but hey no ones perfect. Also I find the plot interesting.
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