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7/13/2011 0:44:40   
TheGuardian_2007
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Old Hands (short story)

So, this is my first post in Legends & Lore. I'm a fairly new fiction writer, so any comments and criticism would be very welcome.

I felt like my characterization was pretty weak (what little there actually was), and the structure felt a bit weak... I don't know. Was my writing style acceptable? Was the plot understandable? Any issues you find, please, bring them up.

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