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10/1/2009 11:53:41

.::oDrew
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Change.

Not quite done, but done enough that you all can read it and tell me what to do next. Thanks.

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10/4/2009 10:07:30

ringulreith
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Umm... It's good, I didn't find any mistakes or gramatical issues... It just sort of let me hanging... I liked it, anyways. Please continue it.

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10/4/2009 10:19:39

Angel of Grief
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The ending was pretty...abrupt. :/
But otherwise, i liked it. :3

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