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7/27/2010 8:46:14

tflo
A True Hunter

Everyday Adventures of a Ghost

Any comments are welcome.

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8/3/2010 15:59:52

stromy
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Interesting idea.

One thing I noticed is that some of your paragraphs talk about multiple topics. If you start a new paragraph when you change topics/ideas, it will make the story a lot easier to follow along with.

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