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8/19/2011 14:15:18

Mind Mage
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I have yet to finish the story, but you can comment on the work so far. More parts to come.

link to part one... PART ONE

Where should Yemisar and Thom go after they meet up with the airship????

< Message edited by Mind Mage -- 8/19/2011 14:21:59 >

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8/24/2011 15:12:48

Mritha
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With his men behind him, he rushes into the battlefeild shortly after the airship arrives.

Should be battlefield

I noticed a few more spelling/grammar errors but won't point them out unless you want me too :) Interesting story so far, I'm assuming the airship is like the ones found in Skyguard?

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8/26/2011 11:56:45

Mind Mage
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yes. the airships are like the ones from skyguard.

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