Aurauris
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Would it be overly Harry-Potter-fan-esque of me to say that your first two stanzas reminded me of a Pensieve? > u< I love the sense of growing strength in the speaker's ruminations, first in being lifted up, then taught to soar and claim the sky as her own. Admittedly, I am a bit curious as to the sudden shift in likening these thoughts to the sea, and then the skies. Regardless, you etch a most soothing picture within my mind. A delectable, freshly-baked hunny muffin for your brilliant work, Jae!
< Message edited by Aurauris -- 10/2/2012 20:37:39 >
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