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6/13/2011 12:53:58   
Master Kage
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Here you can comment on My AE (HS) Fan Fiction OminX


< Message edited by Master Kage -- 6/13/2011 12:58:57 >
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6/19/2011 0:14:22   
Velmur
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Not bad. It's got potential, you really need to add more details and more of your character's thoughts, though.
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6/22/2011 12:16:11   
Drakkoniss
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 Hmm... I like it... Very good way of starting it off, you have...

I do not believe you're logic is sound on the law enforcement thing, butthen again, you ARE insane...
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6/22/2011 21:34:21   
delta blitz
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NOOOOOOO!!! NOT ANOTHER CLOWN *calms down* good intro,could use some more details and action though.
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6/23/2011 14:43:10   
Clown the Jester
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One bad day. Thats all it takes...for a normal man to become a MONSTER! One bad...rotten...terrible...nasty day. Thats all that seperates your people from our people. Theres no canyon seperating us, no wall...just a line drawn in purple chalk. All you need to do is cross the line...or be pushed over it.

Some of us don't get a choice.


Dare to cross? Once you do...theres no going back. Heh heh heh.

< Message edited by Clown the Jester -- 6/24/2011 16:59:06 >
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7/7/2011 2:15:55   
Shadowlord9k
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Geez is there a joker quote you don't know?

Anyway in my opinion it's a bit to short.
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