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5/9/2011 18:02:17   
Lady Aleua
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Cry of the Okami
Please tell me what you think!

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5/9/2011 18:42:55   
Shadow Ravena
Paladin of Shadows


 Nice, good detail, very poetic. One question; if Serenity isn't human, than what creature is she when not a wolf?
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5/9/2011 21:36:18   
Lady Aleua
Member

Serenity is a wolf demon, she can shape shift between human,wolf, or anywhere in between. :) Ill make that clearer in the next part.
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5/10/2011 1:00:40   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

She will help the humans in their quest


would.

Now, I like the overall picture, but when does this story start?
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5/10/2011 16:48:23   
Mortarion
Member

*appears from a warp portal* I must applaud you *claps his hands together* it's very good, I like the way Serenity is connected to nature, but if there is mother earth *his face is crossed by an evil smile* there must be also father death, decay, corruption, it's all a part of a natural cycle, and nothing can stop it, as you say so, sepulchure falls in no category, but I still like it *dissapears in a warp portal*
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5/10/2011 17:17:16   
Lady Aleua
Member

@ DD: It starts just a bit after En and Tropy appear. Im starting it a little behind.

@Delex: Nope. Father TIME :) I see your point though.... *ponders*
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5/10/2011 17:18:49   
Mortarion
Member

Well if you need me I'll dissapear and comment this possible threat to Papa Nurgle, oh also check my story *dissapears in a warp portal*
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5/10/2011 17:25:53   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 There is Serenia the Harvest Goddess and Sylvanus aspect of the Earth Lord.

Then you have Pestilence, one of the Horselords that gains power through spreading plagues.


I was asking about when, since En and Tropy might be lurking about for much longer than the moment we actually encountered them.
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5/10/2011 17:29:01   
Mortarion
Member

When they turned into the entropy dragon?
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5/10/2011 17:40:16   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 @Delex: No, no, I'm talking about the fact that Sepulchure already knew Fae held the Nature half (replay cutscene where the Spy of Falconreach is revealed). He may have had them spy on her, but due to her agility she kept out of their hands or perhaps Sepulchure didn't deem the time right yet.
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5/10/2011 17:41:24   
Mortarion
Member

Oh I didn't understood you
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6/28/2011 15:08:03   
Lady Aleua
Member

Ill be continuing the story maybe every other week or so. depends when I have time
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8/24/2011 13:37:45   
Lady Aleua
Member

NOTICE I have re-written the story! please tell me what you think!
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8/24/2011 13:41:15   
  Gingkage
Wolf Rider


 Impressive start. A couple spelling/grammar errors, but they don't detract from the over-all plot.
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8/24/2011 13:57:30   
Mortarion
Member

I like it.... *ponders*
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8/24/2011 14:40:24   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Very nice Serenity! Though I will admit when you described Thorn I thought it was Imaru at first ;)
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8/24/2011 14:47:56   
Mortarion
Member

^I haven't thought of that, but last time I checked Imaru was a pirate and I was still a daemon of plague
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8/24/2011 16:09:29   
Lady Aleua
Member

Okay, if you see any errors please point them out to me! Much appreciated!
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8/24/2011 17:40:38   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 Something tells me True Mortal will not be able to tell her much, seeing he stands guard 24/7.

Then again ... Greydawn.
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8/24/2011 19:09:58   
Lady Aleua
Member

@ DD hehehe... you'll have to wait and see ;)
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8/24/2011 21:00:19   
Mortarion
Member

Hey Serenity, this is like a tradition to me , but will you include other forumites characters or not? And tbh I am curios about Thorns role in Coto, care to give a hint?
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8/24/2011 22:31:18   
Shadow Ravena
Paladin of Shadows


 Very interesting, and very different from the first time! Must say that I like this better- it seems to be more story like (if that makes any sense...)
I agree with mirtha, I thought that was imaru, but was pleasently surprised to see it was Thorn. How TM can help, I guess we have to wait to see... can't wait ;)
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8/25/2011 7:39:11   
Lady Aleua
Member

@Tigerlady Im glad! And I totally understand what you mean, thats why I rewrote it :) As for TM, youll just have to wait and see! ;)
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8/25/2011 10:19:29   
fygi
Member

quote:

The breeze blew through her long silvery hair as she swiftly made her way down the mountain. Her golden eyes glittered as the sun started to set, staring straight for her destination.

I love the choice of words in the first sentence. It really wants to make you read more. I cant even count the number of times I have been put off by a story's first sentence which then caused me to not continue at all. But you made it so that I want to continue.
I DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER NOW!!!

- Fygi
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9/2/2011 0:55:44   
Lady Aleua
Member

Chapter two is now up!!
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