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4/16/2013 22:28:03   
Razen
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Link to the Poems/Lyrics.

I suppose that I'm starting up some poetry again, hopefully with a bit more success due to the broader subject. As for the title, let's just say that I'm certainly wishing for a dream.
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4/20/2013 15:42:24   
Razen
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Well, I've added four more from the original two.
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4/24/2013 20:54:34   
The Hollow Soul
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From Now On: (#6)
- The flow on this one is the only thing I don’t like, and that could all be on me for how my mind is reading it.

I’m Feeling Alright: (#3)
- I enjoy this one a lot, I can easily picture a story along with the verses and it flows great.

Knight: (#4)
- I like the flow of this one, it’s quickly paints a nice picture of the knight and his surroundings and tells a nice quick story.

Stars: (#2)
- Stars is awesome, it greatly shows the mysteries of a star, the fact that we as humans can ever get to them, they’ll always be out of human reach, but they can still lead a lost or confused soul on a path in a figurative way.

It’s Just a Normal Day: (#5)
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In My Mind: (#1)
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(I'll get to #5 and #1 in a little bit!)

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