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3/29/2013 12:31:03   
abcghimno
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The story is over here.

I'd like help with grammar or bad phrasing. When I end up putting NPCs in (it's inevitable!), I'd also like to know when they're out of character/how to make them more in character. I have a bad habit of writing things in a way that makes events speed by, so help with that would be appreciated as well.

< Message edited by abcghimno -- 3/29/2013 12:35:57 >
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3/30/2013 8:48:48   
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 The first chapter looks fine to me, keep it up I would say.
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3/31/2013 1:44:11   
abcghimno
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Thanks! Anyway, I'm afraid the two most recent chapters I've put up have been mostly filler, but hopefully something will happen in the next.
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4/23/2013 1:24:51   
abcghimno
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Unfortunately, I'm rather stuck in filler land again... I have something planned that should come up soon.

...Possibly.

Oh, who am I kidding? It'll take a while what with school and real life.
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5/21/2013 0:12:09   
abcghimno
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Whoo look, something mildly interesting happened in the story. New chapter! Finally.

I'd appreciate a critique. :/
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