Dwelling Dragonlord
ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
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“Flattering, my dear. But you should know by now, I would’ve understand not seeing your sweet face if it meant you were taking time to recover…” Understood quote:
Warlic spoke, not in condemnation, but with hints of worry at his younger lover’s careless disregard of his own personal well being. Wellbeing/well-being quote:
And Gren didn’t anticipate falling ill after visiting Dragsvard, but look at him now. Dragesvard quote:
It simply mean I am an unpredictable force; you, however, are a dangerous entity in disguise, yearning to break free of that fragile form you’ve taken. means that quote:
“Who, me? Never!” the dragon replied jovially, as if the previous conversation in the kitchen <> never occurred. had quote:
Once finished, Warlic was shocked to see Gren had rose up from the couch, his bag once more slung over his shoulder. risen The story is well-written overall, any problems a reader could have would probably stem from their taste. I like the descriptive writing. It helps the mind's eye to visualize and gives flavour to the sentences. If you would like feedback on anything specific I did not mention, be sure to let me know.
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