Starlight-Discussion and feedback


	Home \| Login \| Register \| Help \| Play

Starlight-Discussion and feedback

Logged in as: Guest

Printable Version

All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Starlight-Discussion and feedback

Forum Login

Message

<< Older Topic Newer Topic >>

8/19/2010 21:46:26

seltin the champ
Member

Starlight

Discuss this short piece of poetry i just thought i would write.

Fixed your link ~superjars

< Message edited by superjars -- 8/20/2010 11:10:49 >

Post #: 1

8/28/2010 9:00:14

Hallie Slidepath
Robot Unicorn Overlord

I like it. It's short, but sweet and describes the scene wonderfully.

quote:

Unable to decide if i am right

Just make that i a capital letter and you're good to go ^^

Sometimes when poems have a structure like this, where everything is supposed to rhyme on one single word it can feel a little "forced".
I don't think you get that feeling form this poem though. I think it's great.

AQW

Epic

Post #: 2

Page: [1]

All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Starlight-Discussion and feedback

Jump to:

Icon Legend

New Messages	No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages	Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages	Locked w/o New Messages

Post New Thread

Reply to Message

Post New Poll

Submit Vote

Delete My Own Post

Delete My Own Thread

Rate Posts

Forum Content Copyright © 2018 Artix Entertainment, LLC.

"AdventureQuest", "DragonFable", "MechQuest", "EpicDuel", "BattleOn.com", "AdventureQuest Worlds", "Artix Entertainment"
and all game character names are either trademarks or registered trademarks of Artix Entertainment, LLC. All rights are reserved.
PRIVACY POLICY