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4/4/2011 22:44:13

superjars
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So, I've never taken a foray into Fanfiction before, so I figured I'd give it a try and see what comes of it. Therefore I bring you the epic tale of a cynical, sarcastic and completely apathetic X-Guardian, bored with adventuring and trying to bring a spark back into his life of playing.

Therefore:

Chapter 1

Also, for me this is totally a community piece. Therefore, if there's some quest or adventure that you think Galus should go on to try and find that excitement of adventuring in AQ again, please let me know and I'm sure I can devote a chapter to it. :)

~superjars

AQW

Epic

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4/10/2011 6:37:46

demolitiondragon
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Those battles usually ended with one of two things: I running away like a little girl,

Should that be 'I', or another term for himself? It could be the way he speaks, so I'm not 100% sure.

quote:

One nice thing about death – come to think of it,

Should be capitalized, Death.

Quite an entertaining read!

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4/14/2011 15:44:43

superjars
Member

Thanks for the corrections. Got them both! :)

AQW

Epic

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4/16/2011 14:27:05

Mechajin
Constructively Friendly!

You've captured the mid-level rut REALLY well. my char is at level 72. and i often get killed quickly or have to run, or destroy something with little to no effort. as for a quest... how about one of the quests with older graphics. that could result in a funny "Everything looks so...Ugly." Line.

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