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6/24/2012 19:19:15   
#legend179#
Member

The story (My Darkest Days) is located here!
I look forward to your comments, questions, and constructive criticism! :D

Chapter One: Complete!
Chapter Two: Complete!
Chapter Three: Incomplete
Chapter Four: Incomplete
Chapter Five: Incomplete
Chapter Six: Incomplete
Chapter Seven: Incomplete
Chapter Eight: Incomplete
Chapter Nine: Incomplete
Chapter Ten: Incomplete

< Message edited by #legend179# -- 7/16/2012 11:36:25 >
DF  Post #: 1
6/25/2012 1:24:22   
Glais
Member

Ah so taking place in close to the present. You plan on detailing their backstories?
DF MQ  Post #: 2
6/25/2012 14:59:32   
#legend179#
Member

Actually, there is going to be a bit of a major twist involved in Chapter One, and you will see why I'm saying this once it's finished.
DF  Post #: 3
6/25/2012 15:36:44   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

"You need to get out of brother...."


"You need to get out of here, brother ...."


That was a nicely written story .... and there is Deux ex Machina to save the day.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 4
6/25/2012 15:58:43   
#legend179#
Member

Thanks for pointing that out!
DF  Post #: 5
7/19/2012 12:37:45   
Beshin Adin
Member
 

 You would think that Syrik, as the main character, would get a full appearance description.
AQ AQW  Post #: 6
7/24/2012 11:33:52   
#legend179#
Member

Haha dang, you're right. I guess I just haven't fully thought about that yet. I'm still working out in my mind how I want him to look.
DF  Post #: 7
7/24/2012 17:29:11   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 I'd suggest you make paragraphs in chapter 1 so your readers have some breathers.

quote:

"You no good, stupid beast."


Do you mean "You are no good, stupid beast."?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 8
7/24/2012 20:13:56   
#legend179#
Member

I do have paragraphs though.
And no, it's meant to be that way. Combining "you no good beast" and "you stupid beast."

< Message edited by #legend179# -- 7/25/2012 2:34:26 >
DF  Post #: 9
7/29/2012 18:12:46   
Glais
Member

Aaaaaand caught up. One thing I didn't understand, how exactly would an Undead army overtake the SandSea? It's pure light there and Sepulchure's forces only use Darkness based Necromancy.
DF MQ  Post #: 10
7/29/2012 23:03:09   
#legend179#
Member

Well I said Sandsea because Surewould Forest is one of the few untouched places, and the fact Doomwood is right next to the Sandsea.
It just made sense in my mind lol. It's subject to change in the future.
DF  Post #: 11
7/29/2012 23:21:26   
Glais
Member

Wait,mDoomWood is next to the SandSea? I could've sworn there was a forest or something between them o.O
DF MQ  Post #: 12
7/29/2012 23:28:58   
#legend179#
Member

Haha, no. There is Doomwood, then a river between that and the Sandsea. Surewould Forest is north of them.
DF  Post #: 13
7/29/2012 23:31:29   
Glais
Member

Ah I see. Had no idea they were so close.
DF MQ  Post #: 14
7/29/2012 23:33:14   
#legend179#
Member

Yeah, just look at the travel map. That's how I know all my locations lol. But I have it memorized after playing for so long.
DF  Post #: 15
7/29/2012 23:49:30   
Glais
Member

Had no current access to it which is why I was unsure Dx
DF MQ  Post #: 16
7/31/2012 11:27:44   
#legend179#
Member

I google it instead of loading that game =P
DF  Post #: 17
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