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#legend179# -> (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (6/24/2012 19:19:15)

The story (My Darkest Days) is located here!
I look forward to your comments, questions, and constructive criticism! :D

Chapter One: Complete!
Chapter Two: Complete!
Chapter Three: Incomplete
Chapter Four: Incomplete
Chapter Five: Incomplete
Chapter Six: Incomplete
Chapter Seven: Incomplete
Chapter Eight: Incomplete
Chapter Nine: Incomplete
Chapter Ten: Incomplete



Glais -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (6/25/2012 1:24:22)

Ah so taking place in close to the present. You plan on detailing their backstories?



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (6/25/2012 14:59:32)

Actually, there is going to be a bit of a major twist involved in Chapter One, and you will see why I'm saying this once it's finished.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (6/25/2012 15:36:44)

quote:

"You need to get out of brother...."


"You need to get out of here, brother ...."


That was a nicely written story .... and there is Deux ex Machina to save the day.



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (6/25/2012 15:58:43)

Thanks for pointing that out!



Beshin Adin -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/19/2012 12:37:45)

You would think that Syrik, as the main character, would get a full appearance description.



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/24/2012 11:33:52)

Haha dang, you're right. I guess I just haven't fully thought about that yet. I'm still working out in my mind how I want him to look.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/24/2012 17:29:11)

I'd suggest you make paragraphs in chapter 1 so your readers have some breathers.

quote:

"You no good, stupid beast."


Do you mean "You are no good, stupid beast."?



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/24/2012 20:13:56)

I do have paragraphs though.
And no, it's meant to be that way. Combining "you no good beast" and "you stupid beast."



Glais -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 18:12:46)

Aaaaaand caught up. One thing I didn't understand, how exactly would an Undead army overtake the SandSea? It's pure light there and Sepulchure's forces only use Darkness based Necromancy.



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:03:09)

Well I said Sandsea because Surewould Forest is one of the few untouched places, and the fact Doomwood is right next to the Sandsea.
It just made sense in my mind lol. It's subject to change in the future.



Glais -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:21:26)

Wait,mDoomWood is next to the SandSea? I could've sworn there was a forest or something between them o.O



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:28:58)

Haha, no. There is Doomwood, then a river between that and the Sandsea. Surewould Forest is north of them.



Glais -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:31:29)

Ah I see. Had no idea they were so close.



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:33:14)

Yeah, just look at the travel map. That's how I know all my locations lol. But I have it memorized after playing for so long.



Glais -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/29/2012 23:49:30)

Had no current access to it which is why I was unsure Dx



#legend179# -> RE: (DF) My Darkest Days - Discussion (7/31/2012 11:27:44)

I google it instead of loading that game =P



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