Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches
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Well hello there. Congradulations are in order... And apologies as I have yet to finish editing my story, but oh well. I still have your critique from my old thread saved. The question that must be asked by obligation to every new AK: What is... the airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow? 50-65km/h, but that's only when the swallow isn't distracted with other things. And now, for something completely different. Since I don't really have any questions, how would you like to turn the tables? You ask me questions instead, and then I'll come back and re-edit the post. I think it could be a fun little inversion of the norm, and I sometimes glean more knowledge based on the questions people ask than by asking questions. What do you say? How many chapters of my story have you read thus far? (My submission for the current contest counts as a future chapter.) All of the ones in your story thread... And yes, I postponed answering these questions until I finished reading them all. That's why it took me so long! Who do you find the most interesting character? My favorite is Volu because I have the hilarious image of him sitting at a little girl's tea table in one of the chairs, sipping tea, very refined, because he's not one of those ignorant Seekers, no, no, he's far too refined for their paleolithic, simple-minded behaviors. As far as most interesting goes, though, the lich rather piqued my interest. I'm very curious about him. What do you think of the battle scenes? They're well done. It's clear they're not the focus, and that you aren't planning to write an action story, and they fit that very well. They're interspersed well so it's not one giant action scene, but there's enough in there. Could Cataclysm defeat Sepulchure? Ufufufu... I actually have an idea regarding writing that, thanks to forum member 1412. Let's just say that we shall see... What do you think my custom title should say? Hmm. That is a challenging one. Truth be told, I'm uncertain. I think mayhap ~DD ~TCO
< Message edited by Teh Cataclysmic One -- 7/15/2012 19:00:25 >
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