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Rynkar -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/27/2008 5:41:23)

comics n' sigs

image 1
the picture captures the elegant appearance of the women the pink seems marvelous along with the flower the only problems is on how there isn't pink in the few bits around her, the flower isn't clearly visible you have to look for it and how the eyes squint witch makes her seem a bit old but over all it is near perfect and is very colorful
image 2
a beautiful picture it is with little to no mistakes the brown and wight swirl looks amazing the women also seems beautiful the only problems i can point out are the very top left hand corner to where it looks like mist not a swirl and the mouth on the women it seems to go out of place with the picture.

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atticus239 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/28/2008 1:45:13)

Examples: Siggy 1 and Siggy 2

CC:

Image 1
The lighting is fairly well placed, but that's about it for pros. There is no real flow beause it criss-crosses here and there. The colors do not match the image very well either. The background color would match better if it was a brown and slowly blending into a blue that would match the bottom of the wing. The image is kinda cluttered because the text is so close to the render. I would make the sig bigger to avoid this.

Image 2
This is a fairly good sig for a few reasons. The colors blend in well together, the text is well placed, and the effects are attractive. But the attractiveness of the effects take away from the focal a bit. I would dull them down slightly. And the lighting is kinda messed up. The glare on the woman's forehead suggest the lighting is above her, but the effects are brightest in the opposite corner. There is only one more flaw. The text is well placed but it doesn't exactly match. I would try a bright red or purple color.

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lufarinvaeilk -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/28/2008 2:54:20)

Art Work Examples

Example #1

Example #1



Image 1
CC: The background is good how its like a whole bunch of needles, that looks cool. Good lighting too, its vibrant. However, "Death From Above" is a little hard to read(maybe its just me). Also, it goes (the background) goes from pink to a very white-ish pink. It would look better if the background was a more brown/light blue color.

Image 2
CC: On the left arm it looks like you either took an effect and placed it over it or smudge the arm just a tad. There's also like a fog or mist over the whole thing. Like it was taken during a shower or something. Otherwise the text placement and the text itself looks good and the colors blend pretty well.


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Smellykiwi -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/28/2008 22:55:28)

My art 1: Example 1
My art 2: Example 2

Constructive criticism for this

I like the way that the dentist adds a sort of "comic" approach to this otherwise fierce monster. The stance of the monster is able to be taken as a mid roar for other monsters, but works with the dentist VERY nicely. The thing about the dentist that bugged me was that even though his simple style added to the humour of this drawing, it is too different, making him seem a bit too much out of place than I'll assume was intended. The direction in which the light source is coming from is clearly visible, although the horns do not cast a shadow. This would be fine if the horns were flat up against the body, but the way that this is drawn shows otherwise. The front tooth on our right (its left) looks out of place and it appears too connected to the rest of the mouth, which does not fit the style of the monster. Another thing about the dentist (sort of about him) is that the writing is very messy and hard too read. The monster is very good though and if these tips are followed, a better version can be reproduced (unless you are one of those people who can only draw something once, then this is remarkable!)

Image 2 constructive criticism. Here is the image.

This image fits well into this DF environment. Some things that do let it down are that the faces on the escorts (rangers) look to be incomplete, as if this image was done carefully with a deadline, then rushed with the faces as it was noticed that the deadline was approaching. The armor on the priest of order seem to be lacking. This is sometimes found when dull colours are used without much texture, or without a wide range of shades. Adding in "Spots" here and there will give it a textured effect. Try different things until you get the desired effect. One way to tell if it is a HUGE improvement is if the artist likes it better than their original, and this is already good, so a huge improvement would make it spectacular. The bodies of the women are great, but are extremely overdone. This does not fit the DF style that well, and a few patterns scattered would be much better.

To sum it up, these two pieces of art are great, but a few things need to be improved.


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asianinvasion01 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/29/2008 2:59:53)

1. My art 1: Intros
My art 2: Comic #1

Constructive criticism for Pae the gecko sig.

The picture is very interesting, I love how the green and white blend together. The gecko is interesting by the facial expression he is giving. It is smirking in a curious way or as if he has a devious idea in mind. The font used fits well but the size should be a bit larger in my opinion. The background used looks futuristic, the way that the white streaks along the green, as comets across a dark sky. The eyes also catch my eye. It is a bit large for the body, but very original. All in all, this is a great piece of art by a great artist.

Constructive criticism for this sig.

This sig is very distracting. The lines coming off the young lady's clothing looks like smoke. As interesting as the smoke-like lines are, her eyes are very distracting. The way her facial expression is being presented, she looks quite lustful. I also like the background. It is not very unique but blends in well because of the smoke-like lines. Inspire. This is quite a good phrase to use with this picture. The way the entire picture blends well together creates a very inspirational feeling. To sum it up, the picture is very unique with a feeling to keep you "inspired" to keep on going.


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~Asian Invasion~

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oker -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/29/2008 6:27:18)

.:My Art:.
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#1 and #2

2.Constructive criticism to: image 1
I like this image.Its's nicely made but I think the render of the woman should be a little down so her forehead to bee shown.I like the effects in the background but the orange-red effect doesn't fit the render.I think for this render you should keep it pink and purple.The text is perfect no comments about it.
Constructive criticism to: image 2
Cool and greeny:D.I like the render(object) in this sig.It greatly fits with the background.The text is good but 'the ravenous gecko' could be a little smaller because the text takes some big space of the sig.The only things this sig needs are some small effects in the bottom left,otherwise it's perfect:)


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Teeth man! -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/29/2008 17:16:13)

Art Examples

Example 1

Example 2

Constructive criticism for image one:

I think that the tag has a very nice colour scheme to it however, I don't think the use to blending with the render is done very intrinsically. I think that the Text and effects around it are very well done because, they both fit in and stand out from the image. Overall I think the image is fairly well done. Although too busy for my taste.

Constructive criticism for image two:

I think that this tag is truly excellent! The use of lighting on the model is very well done, and is very natural. The model fits in well with the c4d, and is beautifully blended. I think the text is good because it stands out and looks very smooth. I think the colours are brilliant and vibrant; and contrast well with the model.


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Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



Rynkar -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/29/2008 20:49:16)

comics n' sigs

image one
the picture its self is very well done with only a few mistakes that i find that make the picture not perfect first of its blurry making the picture in the colorful areas bland witch really ruined the picture second off it doesn't seem that very well lit so its hard to see the details and with out the lighting her knees look conjoined
image two
the only mistakes in this one is the women's mouth the slight opening is way to out of place and kinda draws your attention from the overall picture and the left hand corner where in stead of it being swirl like its misty with doesn't see to belong making it less than perfect and last her left side is a little fuzzy making it a little less perfect


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lufarinvaeilk -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/29/2008 22:48:43)

Art Work Examples

Example #1

Example #1



Image 1
CC: The background is good how its like a whole bunch of needles, that looks cool. Good lighting too, its vibrant. However, the colors dont really work with the render. I think it would look better if the background was a light brown to match the render. The flow could be better, instead of going in one general direction, there going anywhere and everywhere. The length should be longer, max size to be exact. Why? Because now its all mushed together and the text and image are in close proximity with each other making the signature look cluttered. The lines around the text arent needed. If it was the font, then i would have chosen differently.

Image 2
CC: This is a nice sig. I like how the fret of the guitar matches her jacket. The colors match pretty well. But, the text is a little small and the color of it make it hard to see. I would have made the signature long so the text wasnt so close to the girl. Some brown in the background would have been nice, so it could match the chair. Not much to criticize, mainly because its a well done signature.


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chaseman74 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/30/2008 1:05:43)

example 1



example 2




img 1
it is a good fantasy effect with the flaming guitar, the back round is good and so are the colors, i would suggest if it was going for the fantasy, a fireiy sun in the back, that would make the fantasy go farther, if it was to go for just concpet, it is very good, i can't see anything i would change



img 2
this pic looks well done, the color scheme is great, but depending on the pic,if it was concept art, then i would make hlaf the girls face demonic, and a shadowy glow comes off of it, if its not and a pic of somone from a anime, then its perfect, i have nothign i would change









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FishFrost -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/30/2008 1:30:12)

Art Examples

Example 1

Example 2

Constructive Criticism

Image 1

The colors of this image blend very well together and I can sense a "mood" because of this. The text fits perfectly with its surroundings and the flower is a nice addition! The woman herself also fits the mood in this sig. Her hair color and her "sharp" face gives her personality. What bothers me a bit is that the lighting seems a bit off making her shoulders look a bit awkward... it seems like a shadow has been misplaced. Another small improvement would be changing the purple of the background to a more darker hue of purple. Overall this is a very vibrant and beautiful sig!

Image 2

Again, the colors create a mood because of its thematic colors. The woman is very likely in a peaceful and relaxing state right now and you have done a perfect job combining the serene clouds and her relaxing position with her guitar. Oh, and speaking of the guitar it fits perfectly together with the woman making an eye-pleasing combination of whites and browns. Lighting is perfect in this image and, like everything else, the text is suited for this image. The whole image blends together to make an intriguing display of your art.



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Rynkar -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/30/2008 15:40:29)

comics n' sigs

image 1
i like the picture because it looks like even in darkness there is light making it seem hopeful but it looks like darkness is stronger thanks to the women's facial expression witch makes it seem depressing witch in turn makes it have a dual meaning going on.
okay now the problems...first off its not very well lit making the colors look dull and bland and because of that her facial features like her nose are hard to see witch kinda draws the attention away from the whole picture by making yours wonder"wheres her nose?"second off is the wight and black cloud mix it doesn't seem rightly put in.besides those problems its very well made....not so much on the coloring though.
image two
its a good picture all together but there are some flaws i like the way the brown and wight swirl together making it very colorful with makes it very inspiring the smoke effect is done really well and the light coloring is one thing that doesn't need a bit of changing okay now for the few problems her left arm is a little fuzzy from the smoke effect and its too mist like in the top left hand corner and last but not least her facial expression draws your attention away because it just doesn't fit.

please approve me this time i worked really hard on this one.

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Sentharn -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/31/2008 1:22:01)

Image one - Hand drawn, experimental coloring style
Image two - Hand drawn, colored in the GIMP

CC
Image 1
I liked the rather 'hand drawn' effect in this image, although the yellow highlights appear to stand out too much and the different shades of green don't seem to have enough contrast between them. The visible eye was what really caught /my/ eye; it looks very cute and realistic (in that strange, fantasy way) with the little specular whiteness. The lighter shade of the wings looks great to me, including the highlights.


Image 2

I saw this image and immediately thought, "What video game did this come from?" Yeah, it's that cool. The colors are nice, although perhaps a bit faded (but then again, if you're a warrior, do you /really/ want to were bright red and blue clothes?) The fine detail for the chest and upper body armor was a nice touch, The right foot looks a little bit twisted compared to the left one, but the pose is nice.
My biggest problem was, "Is this a boy or a girl?"


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Approved. Work on your CC though.



Wcl Nc -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/31/2008 14:32:41)

Example One

Example two

Image one
I really like the render itself, its blue color of the shirt definitely enhance out the girls face. The focul point of this sig is on the girl, but the swirl in the middle of the sig distracted me, it should be darkened or blured more. The text is a little small, takes time for me to find it, but the text blends with the background pretty well. I really like the fact that the girl is "Flying" away into little swirls, although the girl looks 3D and the swirls looks 2D. I don't like the background color, simply covers the girl's hair. Overall, a great sig.

Image two
The render itself is kinda blurry. The first thing I notice on the sig is the light on the right, is too bright and just stands out more. The sig has a 2-D look on the render, but have a 3-D background, it should add more shadow on the girl to stand out. As I said, the lights are bright, it would be great if it was soft and blended looking, but the flow of the light is great. I really like the text, it stands out even it has the same color of the background, great place for the text. I really like the background, simply of the flow of lights. I also think that the girl should get more contrast, and darken the background so the girl stands out more.

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hammyham159 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/31/2008 16:15:11)

my image 1

my image 2
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image 1


pros--i like this piece. the dragon has very nice details. the shadeing was very well done. another thing is that the blue made the eyes and the horns pop out.


cons-- the major con of this piece was that there was not a very good backround. it was just plain. i think that it could have used a lot more detail. another thing that i saw was that head of the dragon was a little to big for his body
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image 2

pros-- i think that the colors go very well together. i liked how the guitar head glowed as she was playing it. it made it look like every time she played it showed the power of it.

cons-- the person itself was a little blurred. it looked a little like she was being sucked into the backround. i think that it would look better if there was a little more light in it.





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Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



Element619 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (7/31/2008 22:03:28)

example art:
[img1][http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crossskullfr3.jpg]
[image2][http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=snowstormva4.jpg]

Constructive Criticism:

alt img 1:The head on the dragon is a little to big but the scales on the back look cool and so do the spikes on the tail.If you could add a background and eiether shade it a little or add some color. red scales and pale spikes would look cool.

alt img 2: The ships nice the color scemes good. if you could put a point on the front of the ship it would look better and same as the previous img if you could add some background like a dock or in the water some where it way cooler.

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Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



Necromander -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/1/2008 23:29:39)

Examples:
Example 1
Example 2

CC:
For Number 1
The overall quality of the Image is good, but some things distract from the focus. The sparks are very bright, and some arc away from the girls face, drawing attention away. Most sparks appear to be headed towards her, so the sparks effect is essentially neutral. Also, on the left side of the Image, you see ripples that appear to distort the size of the head. If the ripples were extended to the very edge of the Image, the effect would be lessened.

For Number 2
The picture is great. the way the woman is standing combined with the stretched effect of the background makes the Image have a natural flow. The way the womans right arm blurs into the background provides continuity, instead of breaking up the flow. Unfortunately the bright spot in the corner will inevitably draw the Viewers eye away, and it breaks up some of the flow.

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DragonMaster V -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/2/2008 0:52:51)

I'm back! I'm pretty sure I'll get approved, re-read Dep's thread for the hundreth time[>:]

Examples:
Sprite 1
Avatar 1

CC: CC Example

The colors and render fit in very well. Though it could use more colors, then we're talking. The background really does match. Tough since he's a Gecko, maybe you could make those trees, and he sun shining through. Also try putting the text on white, the green text really makes it harder to read. Harder, not hard. I really like how everything matches. And the little addition, Pae's eyes, really make the render clear. Overall this is one of the greatest image with the best combination I ever seen! Nice work!

CC: CC Example 2

The background colors make the render stand out much! The guitar is very bright so everyone can see it. The background really has a lot of... stuff, in it.Though maybe you can darkne the guitar, it's a bit too bright. The text is very hard too read. At first I couldn't read it. I really like how you really made the render stand out. Though the guitar with all the sparks, as mentioned before, make it look like a chainsaw. Overall this is very catchy and a good stand-out render.

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Mephiles The Dark -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/2/2008 21:51:15)

Example of Art :
Hawk Blade
Draconic Blade
I posted only weapons because im more a weapon editor.I love to fuse weapons , make some parts....
Constructive Critism :
1/ This image calls for attantion with the color that it have.It sends like a "light" to the person who saw it and gives a feeling of happyness.The fusion of water reflecting the sun light + the dark smoke of a maze make it a special thing...
But the letters on the image on the smoke part should be in another color that makes the image reflect the sentence.
2/ The second one is a fusion of flowers being burned with a touch of roses.The water in the picture of the girl makes her change the vision of the person like if it was water on the comp.It does good , but the part where the water touchs the smoke does more like a "energy vs electric duel".

Final Part :
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help. Your examples are fine.



Darcken -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/3/2008 0:41:09)

1. http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p49/Cheddar000/IMG_0002.jpg
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p49/Cheddar000/IMG_0001.jpg

2. http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png
There are a lot of nice things about this drawing, including the muscles and dimensions of the dragon. Another thing I've noticed is that the eyes and scales are shown in a finely detailed way. Even though the picture is looking good so far, there are some bad things about it, like why the dragon is colored in blue and red. The problem with it being blue is that it clashes into the background. The problem with the red is that it doesn't go with the blue at all. If the blue parts of the dragon were replaced with a different color such as red, it would look much better.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Pae.jpg
Even though it is hard for me to draw lizards, I would still say that it is drawn well in form and in detail. The eyes are blended with a realistic design and it has skin that folds like a real lizard's skin would. Not to mention the backround, which fits in with the drawing. Overall, the drawing is good, but there is always room for improvement, like how the eyes are a bit oversized and how the head is a bit small. Besides those to little errors, it is a well made drawing.

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ninjamonkeee -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/3/2008 18:35:44)

1. [img=http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6498/twillysmomcopywr5.th.jpg]

[img=http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9009/colorcustomnecrocopyjh5.th.jpg]


2. Image 1: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Kyoko.png?0.57879700%201217801973

The charcoal color on the left side is quite dull, attracting your eye to the brighter, more vibrant colors on the right side. The details on the girls face (the strands of hair, etc.) are magnificently done. The lighter, brighter colors surrounding her face wash out the image and make it all sort of blend together. The surrounding colors I believe should be made into a darker shade, so that peoples eyes are drawn to her face, and not just the brighter colors surrounding it.

Image 2: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png?0.03718800%201217802359

This image has a diverse range of colors. To one side, there is a colorful explosion of red and yellow. On the other side, there is a more subtle purple, black, and white. While the red and yellow drag you in, the darker colors show you the actual picture. The little purple "shards" drag your eye away from the yellow and into the darker colors. When you finally get to the right side of the image, you see the girl there with her head back. This would be an almost perfect image, except the white coming down from right above the girl makes her look very washed out and pale. In the bottom right hand section, it is almost completely black, but in the corner, there is a small bit of color where the authors name is. In that section, in the middle of the darkness, there is also what I believe to be her earing, which also attracts your eye and make you see something other than the darkness around it.

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~NM~

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Sonic1829 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/4/2008 21:30:41)

Preveiw1: Green Zhoom (Notice: this peice is unfinished, This peice of art is also very old; I made it the same day that I had started using Ms Paint.): http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m425/Sonic1829/GreenZhoomUnfininshed.jpg

Preveiw 2: Nightmare Tower (The background was made by Chaos; I recolored it and added quite a few efects): http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m425/Sonic1829/PortalTower2_Myversion-1.jpg

Reveiw1: Snuggles:

I love the way the sig is made. It's colours direct your eyes from the girl and her penquin to the word 'Snuggles' The letering is wonderful and matches the sigs colours and layout. Although if I had made the sig and not you I would have made the text slightly bigger and I would have put the red next to the girl and the blue away from her. Aside from that; It is a wonderfull sig.

Reveiw2: Pending reveiw untill further notice (I'm tired and I'm not realy in the mood to finish. *Yawn*)

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You may now Accept/Not Accept my CC and my pictures.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



Cooly12125 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/5/2008 22:33:21)

Artwork 1: #1- This is not one of my best animations, it will be improved
Artwork 2: #2-Again this isnt the best animation i made.

Image 1

I really liked this sig. Once i look at this signiture, it makes me feel inspired to try to make artwork like this. But one of the main cons of this signiture would be that a part of the forehead of the girl looks like its faded out,also there are alot of pixelated parts of the picture, making the sig look messy. Part of the girls hair is like the coulor of the background, i personally dont like it, but thats my opinion.

Overall, I think this is great artwork but has a few flawed attributes.


Image 2

I also liked this sig, but the background doesnt seem to fit with the girl with the guitar. Also there is a light in the corner that projects very little light(i couldnt see), and there was another light that i could see project on part of the background.I think if you removed the light in the corner the sig would be better because you can see it there but it doesnt project on the background which i think isnt very appealing.

Again, overall i think this is also great artwork but it still may need improving in my opinion.


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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved



LimonRedBull -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/6/2008 3:06:18)

Cancel that, I change my mind. Sorry for the spam



Mephiles The Dark -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (8/6/2008 11:13:14)

Trying again , and i hope my CC is better this time....
Example of Art :
Hawk Blade
Draconic Blade


Constructive Critism :
1/ http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png
This image is good.The scales of the dragon are put in good places to fit his personality.The eyes are a little realistic and it makes him like a medieval dragon of water/air.But i think the muscles need more work.When u look at them it seems like if they have been cutten in 2 parts.The claws in the wings does more like if it was going to pierce himself...

2/ http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Pae.jpg?0.43529600%201217652004
I like this because when it came to my screen the words just bumped out in me.They catch attention greatly.The background is good but could be improved.Throught Pae is a Gecko , maybe Tropical Trees would fit better ? Drawing a gecko is something that for now i don't know how to make like a lot of people in the forums , but u drawed it well.The red eyes could have a more white-ish part , this image has to many red in the eyes , making her a little evil-sized.


Final Part :
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