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Cow Face -> Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (7/4/2008 15:35:00)

Mr. Johnson, County Taxman

This is my first attempt at writing a play. Please note that this is not yet finished. I realize that some things are unrealistic (such as the fact that you don't receive tax forms from the county), but please ignore those details; they were edited for comedy.

Criticism is greatly appreciated!




Mo -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (7/4/2008 21:45:20)

[:D] I liked it a lot. Especially how the bartender knows all of the dogs...and how the tax payer gets confused and runs off "like the old tax collector"




Baker -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (7/6/2008 16:58:29)

Hehe, I liked it also. My favorite part is the one-sided conversation, which I loved the style of (if that sentence even makes sense). I can picture Mr. Johnson being the super-obedient and freaked out underling. ;)




Cow Face -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (7/7/2008 11:32:35)

Thanks for the comments, guys!

The play has been updated.




Cow Face -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (7/29/2008 15:16:32)

Teh Update!

Everyone, I'd like you to meet Joe Evans, a sleazy good salesman!




Cow Face -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (8/1/2008 15:13:05)

Act II, Scene V is up!




Cow Face -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (8/14/2008 18:16:22)

Act II, Scene VI is up!




Cow Face -> RE: Mr. Johnson, County Taxman | Comments (11/3/2008 12:12:46)

I have finished the play! I hope you all have had as much fun reading it as I have writing it.

Act II, Scene VII
Act II, Scene VIII - Finale




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