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Mortarion -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/28/2012 18:57:58)

Sorry, lame attempt at pun :P



lordkaho -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/29/2012 7:17:43)

spoiler:

Dalarai? B-But how? Dimension hopping I presume? That is unless, this Dalarai just happens to be identical to Lore's Dalarai.



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/29/2012 11:18:14)

This one is not the same. This one is a dimensional alternate which draws power from Rix. Although it is true he has much in common with his Lorian counterpart, they are not the same by any means. You'll find out more about that later.



lordkaho -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/29/2012 19:16:31)

Some sort of legacy character then? Anyway, will you be using Bronzefall characters that in way parallel characters from the Lorian Dalarai's story? Like say
spoiler:

In my case, St. Joan and Kuroko are parallels to Jeanne and Noir respectively, only with their roles reversed.



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/30/2012 5:31:32)

That's a good queue to post up the next scene. What you will see here is characters bound across universes, but with different circumstances leading to their powers, very different personalities emerging. You'll see what I mean, heh.

EDIT: Next scene is up. Should either explain or further confuse you.




lordkaho -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/30/2012 5:45:48)

Glad to see Oros is back, and he's high priest to my favorite god of yours, Kalath. It's as if you just transferred your characters from one dimension to another. Good, since it would've been quite a waste to let go of them.

So I assume the central plot is finding out who was responsible for slaying Boelerus and throwing all of Bronzefall's deities into imbalance?



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/30/2012 5:52:15)

Yes, that is the main objective of Marrus. He's going to be the 'main' character, although obviously to get the full view of the story, I will have to follow the high priests around for a bit. Hopefully that won't make narrative too choppy.



Mortarion -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/31/2012 12:05:26)

Will you explain more about the Naga? And I like Bronzefall each more day



Helixi -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (3/31/2012 14:39:54)

I liked this when I got a sneak preview and I like it even more now. Keep posting dear. :D



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/11/2012 18:07:52)

Just added a new poem:

Corporate Circles



Imaru -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/12/2012 13:19:23)

My favorite is Knife in the Body.

I dont know why, but it hits a nerve in me, and i feel as if i can understand how you were feeling when it was written...
I feel as if i know the thoughts running through yourhead as clearly as if they were my own...
And it fills me with this sense of morbid happieness, a perfect paradox in which we both reside.


I love your writing, keep it up.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/12/2012 13:24:58)

Id like to keep Corporate Circles framed over my bed :3


Love it



Mortarion -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/20/2012 22:08:45)

SOoo wil you ever continue Bronzefall?



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/29/2012 17:45:46)

Bronzefall will be continue when I have some spare time. Right now I am working pretty much non-stop and I don't get much time to write because when I have time more stuff pops up and takes priority. But trust me, it's near the top of my to-do list, it just keeps getting pushed down.



Mortarion -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (5/29/2012 17:59:05)

Ok, i was asking because this is great, and I love it, your work is marvellous, now, is your world, I forgot the name, sorry, like a shard of a world, or a full planet?



.Discipline -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (6/1/2012 8:01:56)

The world is called Bronzefall and it is a small planet which would take about 3 weeks to travel by horse-drawn cart. It held together by the power of the gods which allow humans to exist as the primary form of life there. It has many features of a full-sized planet such as oceans, deserts, mountains, forests and volcanos, as well as an array of magical life forms.



Mortarion -> RE: Commentary on the Literary Works of .Discipline. (6/1/2012 18:40:40)

hmm intresting, could you expand on the magical life forms? This somehow reminds me of Mirrodin of MtG



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