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Vampire Max -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/10/2010 12:24:09)

Work 1
Work 2

Art1; I would like to say that the image is very well done. The colors are very well chosen when looking to the image in total. Maybe if there were some red and maybe yellow tints in the armor the blade would fit perfect to the owner of it. The blade on it's turn could use some lenght. What i mean is that the hold is very well done, but maybe needs some more attention in the view of making it shorter. Then the blade could be longer and it would be more fitable. As it came out of Dragon Fable, i would say that the cape needs a just little touch further in the direction of the holder of the blade. The face is well drawn and i have no comments on it. the horns on the hair maybe need just a little touch of shadow for making the light fall even more realistic.
Art2; The picture of the face is well drawn and also very well with the pixels. the ears and eyes in the other case, are having a strange detailed form in compare to the full image. If they would be more pixelled, they would eventually be perfect to the face. Further on, the clothes are very well fitted to the body and face, on a well shaped and shadowed way. The clothes and body are also very good in compare with the face. As valve, I would like to say that the colors are very well chosen.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved.



Valosity -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/10/2010 19:28:11)

Yulgars Inn, pixelated Version (Example 1)
American Idol Banner, Season 9 (Example 2)

Constructive Critism:
Image #1
[img]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/naruto-1.png[/img]
I could easyily be wrong, but to me it looks like on his left shoulder, there is that pointless white target, it seems a bit out of place. The text down in the bottem right corner is a bit eligible, but making it easier to read would depend on what the text says, so it's something that could be changed, but not bad at all. I like the picture quite a lot, because the character had little details, such as the little black neclace around the bottem of his neck (I xoomed in at 500%, could baraly see it). Other than the reasons above, it has great detail, such as the backround bit behind the character, has many small twists and such, I think it can't have much improvement, but it could have a bit.

Image #2
[img]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg[/img]
It seems to me, that the shading adds that bit of touch to the picture, making it better. But also, those little dark spots in the pink? I could be wrong, but if they looked more naturally placed, it would make the picture look all that better. I pretty much think the picture is great, aside from what I have already said, the coloring is great (Placed like it looks like it belongs), the shading is right were it needs to be, the picture I like because it has that speacil bit added from the reasons I have just stated.

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."


~Valo

Approved..



[Tiger] -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/11/2010 19:26:22)


Art

[image]http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/508/mogslayerssighe9.jpg[/image]

[image]http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2808/haloqw8.jpg[/image]


Constructive Criticism

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/gaze.png[/image]

This tag has incredible depth, the C4Ds add great depth also. The smudging is really nice, and it gives to the depth also. I feel like this whole tag was focused around DEPTH
Also from reading the text it points that out also. speaking of the text, I love the arrangement with it, with the line underneath the text and the larger text then smaller, thats whats going on. the render blends perfectly with the background, and the text with the gaze into the depths. I like the one side with that thick border line. I do not see any flaws, this is a truly amazing tag

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/HeathLedger.png[/image]

This tag is a very interesting tag in a sense. The dirt flying smudge effect is very nice, I love the detail in it. This tag has few flaws, it cuts out the renders arms out to much I feel. I also think the head should be smudge more, because the blue sky doesn't move with the flow of the tag. The C4D behind the head blends in almost enough not to be noticed. Overall this tag is very good not amazing but very good, in the smudging sense more than the depth sense.

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved.



.Echo -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/15/2010 15:00:15)

Sample Art

[image]http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c242/Rejected01/fusion.jpg[/image]

[image]http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c242/Rejected01/echoreturn.jpg[/image]

Constructive Criticism

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png[/image]

Very nice, i enjoy the almost, calming glow it has, and the render fits in quite nicely, the colors match, the text is well placed. I only noticed that the render, although the colors match the background, the render seems almost.. out of place, maybe its just me, the other thing is that although calming and serene it seems to be lacking something, idk its probably just me, in any case its a very nice piece and the color scheme works great with the render.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/RememberTagV1.png[/image]

Again the color scheme works well, the background and effects actually change to mimic the look of the render, where it is light on the right, and him helmet is shining, dark on the left where a there is a shadow on his shoulder. The renders seems to be blended, or smudged to much on certain parts, like where his helmet is missing parts on the top left, or parts of his shoulder, also to the left. overall its a very well done piece and other than the slight blending/smudging(my opinion), it is well put together the render is placed perfectly and the bg is outstanding.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


approved



Lady Aliella -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/15/2010 18:47:35)

Example 1
Example 2

Constructive Criticism
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/ragnasqj4.png
It's a nice design for an armored guy, but the skin is a little bright compared to the clothing. What really stood out to me, though, are the leg armors. It looks too tight, as if it would hurt walking in it. The gloves look a little too big for him, that it would fall off. One of the things I liked about this picture is that it is very detailed and has realistic shading. Overall, it is very good.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/2qc1kj7.jpg
What I love about this is that the eyes gives off the cute feeling. I found myself looking into it whenever I try focusing on the rest of the image. The shading and detail are accurate, too. I only had one problem with this picture, which was that the colors didn't blend into each other, but other than that, it's really amazing.


"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."


Approved



Mechajin -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/16/2010 9:01:49)

CC 1
Its a Really Nice Naruto Sig but the text is completely unreadable and although the background IS lovely.... it DOES clash with the Naruto render making the whole picture look a little odd. BUT over all it IS nice i think if the background wasnt as contrasting with naruto's hair it would be a lot better. i'll give it a 6/10!
CC 2
I think theres too much going on in this picture... also the Monochrome doesn't make everything clear combined with the shattering effect i think it looks a little messy at first glance it looks as if the woman in the picture just has an open mouth because the spoon is dark and so is her clothing i couldnt see WHY her mouth was open or why it was called Taste until i looked quite close... i'm giving it a 4/10 i just think it needs colouring of some sort and less going on.
My work 1
(Note this isnt an AE work its a sonic the hedgehog sprite)
My work 2
"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Please read the first post - included is a link regarding C&C; I feel you need to be a little more thorough.



Nanashi -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/16/2010 16:18:03)

Large Piece
Signature


CC
None of the Links on the main post worked for me so I took images from other peoples posts.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/gaze.png[/image]
Overall this is an amazing tag. The render is very great quality and the overall balance adds to the tags appeal. It has great depth and the lighting in the tag is very well executed. The bar on the left side is barely noticed but plays as a nice accesory. I am drawn to the left side due to the illusion that it creates of being a sky. The piece of her hair that is smudged could be blurred a bit so the transition is easier and the text sticks out a bit too much for my tastes, and I believe that it would look better without the 1 px white border but overall it is a nice tag.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Spidey.png[/image]
This tag is very monotone and that distracts me from the overall concept. The concept itself is good but the tag could use more depth and colors to offset the monotony of the red. The effects are scattered throughout the tag and in some places there are too many effects for my eyes to take in. The lighting in the tag is mediocre at best and due to lack of depth, my eyes stray around the focal. I would suggest slightly blurring the effects on his waist and blurring the clouds in the background, maybe throw in some other colors into the clouds and background and change the colors of some of the effects so there is a variety in the tag.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved



biz02 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/16/2010 18:46:25)

lol I know I probably suck, but here are some of my paint stuff of AQWorlds:

They are from my gallary, because Idk how to get a seprate picture:

Look for the ones named "Evil Iquis.." and "Evil Inqui..." (the one thats a character page)

Lol I know I suck but I started yesterday...

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. Please follow the application rules.



Khelios -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/18/2010 16:50:55)

Locked for new approval thread.



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