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Vahn_Kaichi -> [SS] I Vahn't your Blood(y Comments)! (6/6/2009 20:37:29)

*That clever, double-punny title was a creative suggestion of PoeticSpanner :D

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Have you been to this SHINY THREAD and read one of the stories posted there?
O: So if you want to comment them, this is the right place. Your comments. I want Vahn't em'. Graur.



jerenda -> RE: [SS] I Vahn't your Blood(y Comments)! (6/6/2009 23:29:40)

Vahn! Hi! Remember me? At all? The slightest?

You changed your avatar. And you're an AK? Cool. How? Wait... is this the Vahn I know? *reads story*

Well, I think I recognize the writing style. Whatever. I'll have to wait for your reaction to find out if I'm talking to a complete stranger or not. In the meantime, I'll critique!!

Scary person... scary old man... Oh, it's winter. *silence* That's sad. So... hopeless. Poor people.

Do they all die?

I'd better read Chapter Two.

Creepy little girl!!! Ah, vampire. Or perhaps ghould. I pity that family. They don't stand a chance.

And Todd will be the voice of reason that is ignored. I see. Write more!

You've improved a lot. (If you're the guy I think you are.) Seriously. And why are both the girls in your story scary?



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