jerenda
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Vahn! Hi! Remember me? At all? The slightest? You changed your avatar. And you're an AK? Cool. How? Wait... is this the Vahn I know? *reads story* Well, I think I recognize the writing style. Whatever. I'll have to wait for your reaction to find out if I'm talking to a complete stranger or not. In the meantime, I'll critique!! Scary person... scary old man... Oh, it's winter. *silence* That's sad. So... hopeless. Poor people. Do they all die? I'd better read Chapter Two. Creepy little girl!!! Ah, vampire. Or perhaps ghould. I pity that family. They don't stand a chance. And Todd will be the voice of reason that is ignored. I see. Write more! You've improved a lot. (If you're the guy I think you are.) Seriously. And why are both the girls in your story scary?
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