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DragonYugi -> Hell's Rumble - Comments (12/10/2009 5:22:55) Story can be found here. Feel free to comment and criticise. :)

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Reaper Sigma -> RE: Hell's Rumble - Comments (12/26/2009 23:28:29) Great story! A lot of voice, though the story is a bit unclear. What did Marcus' father lie to him about? Maybe a flashback? And what is the relation between the blacksmith and Marcus?

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DragonYugi -> RE: Hell's Rumble - Comments (12/28/2009 10:48:15) The Devil lied to Marcus about the past of the Empire and his mother. And the blacksmith is the only one in town and... well.. MArcus is normally sent there to pick up stuff. So if you actually go to a store a few times you start knowing the seller if it is the same one all the time :P

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DragonYugi -> RE: Hell's Rumble - Comments (6/28/2010 16:36:20) I shall post the next chapter very soon. I need to start getting this project up again.

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