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Mritha -> RE: Mritha's Collection of Written...Stuff (3/28/2013 22:40:39)

Chapter 4 has been replaced.

@Dwelling, I suspected that was her question, but wanted to be sure. Had it been a plot related question that I ended up not addressing, I'd have to go back again and fix it. I don't want to do that :P

@Gin, Thank you :)



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Mritha's Collection of Written...Stuff (3/30/2013 11:09:01)

Fair enough.

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The walked mostly in silence, Ondine focusing on leading her friends though the forest and the rest of them not wanting to distract her.

through

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Only when the carriage turned and pulled to a stop by the house did Violet see and recognize the crest painted on the side. It was a charging boveox, belonging to one of the few families of nobility left.


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A crudely drawn white serpent grasping a rose in its mouth had been drawn on the cart. It was part of the family crest that Violet remembered seeing on Lady Kira's carriage.

So what does the crest exactly look like?



Mritha -> RE: Mritha's Collection of Written...Stuff (3/30/2013 13:01:49)

Fixed. I'd forgotten that I had already described the crest, in part at least. Its been changed to this:
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Violet looked over at the side of the cart, something catching her eye. A crudely drawn charging boveox had been painted the worn wood, reminding her of the crest for Lady Kira's house.



Mritha -> RE: Mritha's Collection of Written...Stuff (11/13/2013 15:24:29)

Short story up, finally got around to posting this. Function over Fashion explains why my character from L&L looks so differently from my NPC.

I've continued writing TLoaH between classes, but its all hand written in my notebook and I haven't yet typed it up. Currently exploring a different kind of shaman I learned about in art class, with sand painting.



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