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1412. -> The Shard Series (2/4/2011 17:03:48)



Feel free to post about the Shard series here.
any corrections or feedback will be greatly appreciated.


A Major part of Shard is the Fragment Stories,
All of this is in chronological order

Fragment:
Crowned:
Aftermath:
Fallen Heroes
Ch. 1
Void Spire

Twilight's Dawn
Ch. 2
Night Sky
Ch. 3
Twilight Legacy
Ch. 4
Evolution
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Another one of my works is Starlight Chronicles.
As well as Shadow Slayer, A Work in progress
New Edition!: When Light Casts a Shadow...

More of my work will be coming soon!



Mritha -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (2/5/2011 20:06:57)

I just got through reading chapter one and your story is very intriguing so far! A bit more detail with the vehicles would be nice though, what did they look like? When I get some spare time I will read the rest, good job so far BurningKatana :)



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (2/5/2011 21:44:29)

Thank you for the feedback :)
And each of the Heroes life force vehicle is different.

Zero's life force vehicle has a dark board which leaves behind small not that noticeable streams of light, Zero stands up on the board as if he was surfing.
Kotaro's life force vehicle has dark wings which emit dark fire and a dark stream when going fast.



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (2/8/2011 4:39:46)

Fragment: Dusk is now up and ready but it is only a teaser chapter.
And I will be adding another chapter to Twilight Soul later.



Mritha -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (2/14/2011 18:41:51)

Just finised with chapter 9. Storyline wise you fic is very cool, though I sometimes have trouble keeping track of who is saying what. Using "He said" and "She questioned" and the like would lessen the confusion :) I'm looking foward to reading more work from you :)



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (2/14/2011 21:48:19)

k I edited your advice in there, now there should be less confusion.
and I will be adding more chapters soon.



Mritha -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (3/7/2011 20:45:56)

Just read chapter 11, the flashbacks were very informative. Kinda makes me think all is not lost for Kotaro........



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (3/7/2011 20:51:55)

Well... *Grins* There is more to come.
I think I will write a chapter for Fragment right now.
Maybe it will even shed some light on something...



Glais -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/23/2012 4:39:43)

Complete When Light Casts a Shadow. Not bad though some parts didn't make sense to me as well, I no longer play AQW, thus I had no reference point for current events.

Anyhow, from what I've heard the plot made sense, sort of. So his Dragon can become a gun eh? Interesting, though kind of odd.

Gravelyn could potentially become an interesting character were this not a short story, hmm...



Mortarion -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/23/2012 6:38:11)

Wait you are BurningKatana?



Glais -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/23/2012 14:58:17)

He is indeed.

EDIT:Read the Platinum+ story...I like it but I don't get why it's posted in DF Fanfiction, it seems much more like a standalone or HS based story.



Cataclysm -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/23/2012 22:29:44)

I've talked with him about that. Let's just say that you'll find out later.

... I still need to get around to reading that "Light/Shadow" story of yours. I've had the spottiest memory lately. Doesn't help that I haven't felt much like reading myself lately...



Glais -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/24/2012 5:47:12)

Oh...in that case I generally...ok I hate it when Earth crosses with Lore.

HOWEVER, that's not a fair reason for me to give up on the story.



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/24/2012 15:48:27)

@Glaisaurus_x: Thanks, and I figured that since Ventus becomes more proficient with guns, later on, his dragon would learn
how to suit Ventus's needs to use its power more wisely. The Gun basically is a dragon breath shooter that helps Ventus aim it.
And..I wouldn't say directly cross into Lore---I'll let you find out, and let you be the judge of how well I connected it.. [;)]

@Teh Cataclysmic One: No worries, get to it whenever you have the time to.

@Mortarion: Indeed I am, I was gone for a while, but I'm back. With a new name too!



Mortarion -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/25/2012 20:33:30)

Ahh ok, good to have you back



1412. -> RE: Fragment Series Commentary (5/25/2012 20:50:57)

Thanks, good to be back.



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