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Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/30/2011 12:51:41)
Lol. I can tell you don't like velmur. And if you decide to put me in this story (Not saying you have to) 1. I don't wear heels. i wear sneakers. 2. Id probably kill velmur right there and then. 3. don't make me put my arm around yours. 4. i dont have umbrellas. 5. i dont wear dresses...or skirts. I prefer jeans or shorts, and baggy t-shirts. 6. im a tomboy. 7. I LOVE making awkward moments for other people. But you make really good stories. Teehee ~Achillea~

Velmur -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/30/2011 13:14:28)
quote: 2. Id probably kill velmur right there and then. HEY! You could not kill me!

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/30/2011 13:15:34)
I could turn into a werepyre and eat you. Teehee

Velmur -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/30/2011 13:19:50)
Darn... stupid shape-shifters.... I could take on my true form and kill you just by you looking at me... maybe. I dunno.

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/30/2011 13:21:13)
OMG i didn't know you were Medusa! Teehee

Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/1/2011 0:43:22)
I would be more than happy to have you in my story Achillea, however since it is a western inturpretation I don't think I can have you in sneakers Jeans and more modern clothes. This story takes place more in the 19th century. However your character does not have to wear heels or dresses or umbrellas or stuff like that. Hm...I think I can do the tomboy and aqward attribute. I'll thing this over and see what I can come up with. Thanks again.

UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/1/2011 9:56:04)
5 reasons that i joined Carnival: 1.Clown is there 2.Clown is Crazy when it comes there 3.I Love Chaos 4.I Love destroying 5.my name is Yuniti according to The Legend of Range not Unity

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/1/2011 10:36:07)
@Clowny Yay Thanks ^^ Instead of heels, i could wear the flat shoes things. Iv'e worn them before. Their okay, except they hurt my feet a little :P I extremely dislike umbrellas. I HATE those things, unless it's raining. Teehee

Doom Desirer -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/1/2011 11:40:17)
@Unity: Ermm.... number 5. is irrelevant because it does not have anything to do with the story. Alos, your character is called Yuniti because that sounded medieval. On topic again: I kind of dislike scenes where the king guy is too weak to retaliate. Actually nevermind. I find them kind of funny.

Velmur -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/2/2011 10:34:10)
Clowny, Don't have her kill me! PLEASE! Her=Achillea

Carly9467 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (7/4/2011 23:22:02)
Let me kill him! Please! It would make my day :D

Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/4/2011 22:21:53)
Very interesting second chapter Clown! So I'm assuming the story will either be from the point of views of Drake and the Clown, or maybe it'll be in third person? Anyways, the story seems great so far, I'm guessing we'll be seeing more new characters in the next few chapters eh? Anyways, can't wait to see what happens to Velmur and.....DrakexD

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/4/2011 22:54:52)
Nice second chapter,can't wait to see when my character comes into play.

Jae10 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/5/2011 2:00:14)
< Yea, splendid job so far! The character depiction of Ms. Jae is pretty well accurate! Chapter 2 was extremely touching! :D

megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/5/2011 2:23:08)
Lookimg good Clown. I quite like this interpretation of me. Mind you, he seems a bit...surly. Need I remind you that The Dealer is impeccable in his good manners? But I like him still. I wonder what those seeds do... and you know, why The Dealer did not just explain it. Maybe noone would beleive him? Anway, may I reccomend copying the second chapter and putting it in a second post rather then putting it all in one post? It breaks up the chapters better, and there is less chance of you hitting the word limit. yes, there IS a word limit in one post, though i don't know how much it is.[;)]

Cataclysm -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/5/2011 2:43:48)
Character limit per post is ~140,000 characters. I hit it on my story in the War Story Thread for DF, so I ended up making my own thread for it. For an idea of how long this is, I hit it at the end of Chapter Nine. Clown is completely safe for quite awhile for the character limit per post.

megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/5/2011 2:46:25)
I know, but It would save him a lot of hassle to break them up into different posts while he only has two chapters.[;)]

Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/5/2011 19:53:04)
I appologize for my tardiness, my good man. It shall be my pleasure to comment on your story. grins Interesting... I like the continued lore for the Prairie... I like my char, too, obviously... You make a very good story writer. Hmm... The Silhouette is thought to be a spirit, eh? Adds a nice air of mysticism, which was quite prevalent, as the new inhabitants of the west tended to have quite alot of, being... secluded... from the main Christian orthodox views. Rough place, out west... not everything was explained, and there were many crazy stories circulating about... XP Interesting... Yes, I quite like the idea of my character being death... I suppose I sortof get that kick from the sadistic violence that would have been my specialty, especially with what you say of my accuracy... Interesting... only three years... Glad I have a knife with me. I thought I would... I guess prison probably changed me quite a bit... I probably had quite a bit of time to catch up on my reading, among other things... I do wonder what the key is for, though... Inbterestingly almost hypocritical, Famine... perhapse he means to eat so much it causes a shortage? MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! Seems you may have taken my comment of riches seriously... Good. Makes him have even more similarities to my character... Makes me think I'm going to kill them all... Probably take out Famine first, he has a gun drawn... And he'd make a good temporary meat shield... Interesting... late enough in the timeline for a shotgun to hold more than 2 shots, aparently... That means it's probably at least 1887... I like my response to that question... shows tact, something I like to see when someone else is at the reins of my character... glad you understand me so well... O.o Beleen... I'd ask if that was legal, if this wasn't a fan-story. XD I like the fact that you included a similar background concerning my family, as well... 23 Liberty Bonds... I wonder how much that's worth... hard to tell, especially with inflation, and all... Crows... 3... An Omen, perhapse? Makes me think he's trying to sell narcotics... A bullet, yet it is a shotgun she weilds... XP Yes... Quite interesting, indeed, this story is... I've wanted to conversate with the dealer for quite a while... argue... Perhapse not deal, but I would like to talk with him anyway... maybe we could figure something out... I was thinking of the niose, too... Quite easy to get into a new way of thinking, if you know how to do it... works well for stories... Reminds me of Jae, too... The mood of the story makes me somber... Pity, really, that all that which I know shall happen will... She can be quite nice, that one... Still, I admire it, after knowing of her so long... So innocent, so nice... I can see how a man's heart can be changed by kindness like that... I can see how I could have such preconceptions about mankind, too... Dark times, dark deeds, rough life... puts a damper on ones mood, especially after rotting in prison for 3 years... Quite a good story, indeed... it makes me look foreward to the distant future event we are planning... the Apocalyptic one... I like your talent for description... emotions... Brilliant. I shall be looking foreward to working with you, indeed... ......... @Celestin: I believe he is going to have it going from alternating points of views... Yes... I am looking foreward to seeing the rest of the characters' interperatations, too... @The Dealer/Kyle: I like that Dealer, too... Perhapse he was just on the bad end of a morality war... Jae seems extremely stubborn when it comes to morals, and some people are like brick walls, in certain aspects...

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/12/2011 18:40:42)
Nice third chapter Clown,though I thought I would be one of the first lackys you called out but meh I know I wasn't the first to join......or the last to leave.[>:]

Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/15/2011 16:25:26)
Thanks David. But don't worry, you'll be apeearing very very soon.

Jae10 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/15/2011 18:52:30)
< Splendid third chapter. I am so sorry that Velmur got offed so soon. Now what's going to happen to Overlook? D:

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/15/2011 21:06:12)
Good to know clown,but I do wonder if you will be making up my revovler skills from scratch or will you use some of my soldier story's gun slinging moves.

Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/16/2011 17:08:06)
Hm....I think I will be doing them from scratch.

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (8/16/2011 20:19:01)
quote: I meant that the way I handle my revolvers and how drakkoniss uses his in the perfect solider story. You could use that for my character and his in this story as it will make it easier for you and you won't have to think as much about how we will handle situations. Keep this in mind ^ but then again you never disappoint. x3

megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (9/1/2011 9:48:47)
quote: @The Dealer/Kyle: I like that Dealer, too... Perhaps he was just on the bad end of a morality war... Jae seems extremely stubborn when it comes to morals, and some people are like brick walls, in certain aspects... I guess.

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