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Celestin123 -> (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/11/2011 12:31:15) Hello peoples I finally started my story, The Revanchist! I hope my readers like it and I plan to work really hard on it![:)] Here is the link to my story! The Revanchist

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Ancientz -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/11/2011 12:43:24) Nice story Celest, but you forgot to put your Disccussion thread link on your story thread.

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Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/11/2011 12:45:12) oh write sorry i forgot, thanks for reminding me Ancientz xD

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Axilmeus -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/12/2011 2:51:01) The story looks good so far and I'm waiting for subsequent chapters. Granted, it'd be much easier to read if divided into paragraphs.

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superjars -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/12/2011 13:15:46) To be honest, the color formatting makes it a difficult read and therefore hard to give a fair assessment of. Some of them hurt the eyes.

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Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/12/2011 13:24:24) @Superjars: Hmm the color seems fine to me but I see what you mean so ill try to make the colors darker Edit: Ok i edited the colors so i hope you find it more readable but if it still hurts your eyes ill make it even darker @Below: Actually the story is kind of my perspective of the aftermath of comedy and tragedy

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Master Kage -> RE: (HS) The Revanchist: Discussion (7/12/2011 13:41:42) its quite interesting, I am assuming that the reason Super City was destroyed was the war between Demolicus and Davinci Edit-Oh i did not read the note before the story

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