(HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion

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Arachnid -> (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/13/2011 10:48:46)
Story is here. Discuss! ^^ NOTES: Narrator is Wiiman Timemage. The captain is Arafae. ~Lady Zafara

Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/13/2011 10:56:18)
I'm glad you finally made a discussion thread. I think your story is really great so far and the whole pirate theme really amuses me( i love pirates, i think there so funny!) I'm glad you like my story too!^^ I hope i see new chapters soon too

Doom Desirer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/14/2011 11:39:53)
Likin' the story! Edit: This reminds me of the story of Ponce de Leon or whatever who searched for the fountain of youth.

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/14/2011 19:50:23)
I like the story as well. You have come along way as a writer and I commend you on that. Keep up the good work and read my stories when you have the chance.[>:]

Arachnid -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/15/2011 23:10:16)
I always read your stories Delta! =P You've been here since the beginning with me, and I have come to deeply respect you and the rest of the forumites that were here when I began this writing journey. I have a confession to make, though. When another forumite was commenting on your story and clown and gray's story, he said Clown and Gray were the best (Not surprised), but that you were second. This made me slightly upset. I had thought that I myself was the second best. Apparently, I was incorrect. It made me feel...Too self-centered. Therefore, with this pirate story, I hope to get higher in the story totem pole. I'm shooting for second, (I can't beat Clown and Gray =P) so watch your back!^^ Thanks for bein' a great friend, and reading my stories from the beginning! ~Lady Zafara

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/15/2011 23:17:58)
@arachid: X3 glad to hear. I already knew I was in second place from the beginning as I read my stories as I write them and then compared them to clown's and everyone elses(also many forumites say that I take second place). I make alot of grammical mistakes because I'm used to using MS word(unforunitly I can't write on this laptop). I hope you do surpass me so that it makes me dig deeper into my imagination.

Doom Desirer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/16/2011 15:23:14)
I feel so ignored... I started writing at the beginning too... Whatever. Arachnid, was your story actually based off the story of Ponce de Leon who searched for the fountain of youth?

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/16/2011 15:27:22)
@doom: don't feel bad,I think your a great writer as well. Your stories tie with Ancientz's and he writes pretty good. I like reading everyone's story,they are all awesome in a different way,some people are very imaginative,while other's tend to use real world facts. Personally I prefer the air(can anyone guess where I got this joke from) but that's just me.

Vector -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/17/2011 13:34:20)
I'm not exactly sure, but it seems like the mermaids be luring th' pirates with (fake) romantic attraction... is that so, Arachnid?

Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/17/2011 21:09:29)
GRAAAAAAAAAAW!!!!!!!!!!!! CURSES!!!!!!! I wrote a reply for her story for probably an hour or more, and then I got hit with a friggin error, and now it's all gone!!!!! THE PAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So much scientific lore lost... so much commentary, down the drain... Zafara seems to be a mermaid, along with her other titles, making me wonder if that is an earlier incarnation of her... if not, she would have to have been turned into a mermaid at some point... I say this judging on your bio you gave... This makes me wonder if this is the same timeline even more... and whether it is in modern times (somewhat unlikely), or if there was time-travel on my part... Although the fact that there are chars with the same names, and mostly the same personalities as our current-time ones makes an alternet universe more likely, there's a chance that it is earlier in the same universe...

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/18/2011 22:23:45)
Huh. I was under the impression that this was set in pirate times in an alternate universe. But then, I suppose you really couldn't call this a HS story, even if you do use HS characters. This probably should be cleared up, just so we know what's going on.

Arachnid -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/18/2011 22:33:06)
You'll understand the whole "time" thing eventually, don't worry. But I'll say this: 1. The mermaid IS LADY ZAFARA. 2. No, this is not an alternate dimension. 3. Yes, this is pirate times. 4. It's closer based on the fourth POTC movie than the one other guy. 5. No, they are not going to be the same. 6. Ummm...Meh heh heh? ~Lady Zafara

Vector -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 0:06:29)
laughs i told you to use the name "Redeye", an' you went right up an' used my HS name instead! XD ah well, next chapter perhaps. not like its a big deal anyway. :P Still likin the story, though it makes me wish i had an eyepatch now [:D]

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 0:36:29)
Wait, you mean Arafae and the rest of them got away?! Bah! Puny humans... Anyway, one question - before Arafae was told to throw that sand in my eyes, what did she think the jar of sand was going to do? Also, I'm probably biased, but I think this was the best chapter yet.

Arachnid -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 1:21:58)
I decided to use experimental for reasons to be seen. -Stay tuned!- Who knows? She shouts at water and steering wheels... You can never know with the Captain O.o "I've got a jar of dirt! I've got a jar of dirt! And guess what's inside it?" lawl... ~Lady Zafara

UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 4:17:06)
Can I know if i can have your permission to make a Pirate Story,Titled "Captain Destruction of The Sea's"?

Arachnid -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 12:01:31)
Sure! Join in the fun! =D ~Lady Zafara

Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 18:58:05)
A river, eh? Interesting... makes me wonder if Mermaids can handle fresh and salt water, and brackish, but not as much... Hmm... Interesting... Perhapse this occured during or just after the events of Comedy and Tragedy in my timeline... hard to tell with time-travel and all... In fact, it could perhapse have been earlier in my life, when rage ran rampant, before I became content with the situation of how my life works, and how I effect things... Massive creature, considering Crocodilians' horrizontal orientation... O.o Hind feet... strange... HUZAH!!!!! And thus ends the major annoying accent factor in this story, or at least for a long time, hopefully... Is it not in the water at that point? I suppose it could be massive enough to snap at you over the side of the ship, though... Meh... Hmm... This could be interesting...

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/19/2011 19:12:16)
quote: Massive creature, considering Crocodilians' horrizontal orientation... O.o Hind feet... strange... Well, he is crocodilian, but his physique and stance are closer to that of a human.

Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 19:59:53)
Very nice...hm...If I was to be in this story...hm...how would I be interpreted? Amusing question. Perhaps...heh heh...Maybe I would be in some way connected with a Jolly Rodger...heh heh heh....yes...very amusing. I like the story. Drakkoniss...this could be an alternate timeline...hm...very amusing...

UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 20:02:46)
Hmm? Can I help...Arachnid?

delta blitz -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 20:05:03)
Hmm....interesting indeed,pirates were never my strong point(unless you speak of One piece) so it's amazing how happy I am with this story. Perhaps adding made up cursed fruits would add to the fun. @clown: I almost forgot to welcome you back,welcome and I'm using your character again in my new story.

UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 20:07:17)
@Delta LOL One Piece reference?

Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 20:44:10)
His name is Jester. Thats Clown T. Jester He's gonna be RINGLEADER OF THE MADNESS! He's the most insane sea dog ya ever did see! How'd that happen? WA HA HA HA! He learned a funny joke.

UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) The Story of Captain Arafae Discussion (7/23/2011 21:40:51)
Ooh! Application Form! Pirate Name:Unity D. Xhenus. Pirate Occupation:Leader of Destruction. Weapons:Daggers. Group:Destruction. That all Arachy...

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