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Oddball -> (DF) Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 15:48:30)

So guys, Decided to FINALLY get round to starting my L&L project, It can be found here!

Note: This is the first story I have written in a LONG time.. So bear with me if I'm a bit rusty :3


Edited title to make clear which game it's about. ~DD



Shadows Morgenstern -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 15:58:04)

Bloody hell Oddball! Rusty? You LIE![:@] But seriously though you have some good talent Oddball! Cant wait to read the rest!



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 16:02:51)

Haha.. Thanks Bro :3
Will probably get 'round to starting part 2 tomorrow, If I have the time



aizenv3 -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 16:49:35)

The part when the person was
quote:

I didn't kill your mother...it was...
and then he got killed was like that part in Scary Movie 4 o.0

Well, it's epic Oddball! Got any ideas to put anime references



nield -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 20:50:02)

Well, Hello there oddity of the round rolling objects! A wee bit short, with a few errors here and there, but it has potential.



Shadow Ravena -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/14/2011 21:11:05)

Nice! I like it, can't see any errors (with my grammer, no surprise) and certainly grabs your attention. If thats rusty, I can;t wait to see what else you'll do!



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/15/2011 13:13:49)

@Aizen Strange.. I've never watched Scary Movie 4 xD.. and Oh Yes. Expect anime references, Quite a few of them

Thanks for all the feedback guys, Appreciate it [:)]



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 19:50:07)

Just popping in and letting those people who care know.
Part 2 of my prologue will be up somewhen between now, or at the very latest, early tomorrow morning ^^



Shadows Morgenstern -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 19:53:38)

Part two! Cant wait! *sits cross legged and eats some cupcakes* I'm waaaaaiiiiiiiting! =P



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 21:00:29)

Notice: Part 2 is LIVE!, It's a bit larger then the last part, and a new character is introduced! :D

What will this bring for our story? WHO KNOWS!?



Shadows Morgenstern -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 21:15:22)

I knew that the young lad was you Odd![:)] But man, you know how to set a mood! I cant wait for the rest of your tale! Keep up the good work bro!

P.S. That Shadows guy is sexy. XD



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 22:02:27)

Surprise!
Ninja'd part 3 in there while nobody was looking

In this addition to our story, PLOT!

YAAAAAAY!



Mortarion -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/17/2011 23:54:54)

Nice story spherical thing made of odness



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 7:38:58)

xD Shadows

And thankies to both of you! :3 I know the parts aren't very long, but remember. This is only the prologue [;)]




Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 8:49:56)

And then suddenly PART 4 :P

In this part.. MOAR PLOT,
and a lead up to a fight scene!



Shadows Morgenstern -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 10:07:15)

Undead...God Knows why they are attacking! =P Anyway FIGHT SCENE WANT!

P.S. You dang ninja! XD



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 11:40:14)

Final part is LIVE! WOOOOO!

This concludes the Prologue, what will happen now? Only God Knows!

Also.. look out for those anime references! :D



Cataclysm -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 15:41:57)

I see mostly cosmetic changes, though the frequency with which you end dialogue without punctuation is certainly jarring. I'm also not quite sure why you have the speaking attribution (i.e. Fred said) on a separate line. Just a random example I'm copy+pasting:

quote:

"Hey, I was going to eat that"

Odd whined at Shadows


Should be:

quote:

"Hey, I was going to eat that," Odd whined at Shadows.


(exclamation point instead of comma is a plausible option here)

Grammatical issues aside (they're one of my pet peeves when it comes to stories), it looks like the start of something interesting. I wonder where this'll take us... I suspect somewhere good, no doubt. I've got a sneaking suspicion of some plot details, but I'll abstain from posting anything in regards to that. Good job so far, and I feel like it will only end up getting better.



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 16:59:49)

It's how I write mah stories TCO :P, Everything I do seems to be Odd [>:]




Shadow Ravena -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 17:11:22)

*whistles* thats a lot of chapters Odd! Well written, and nice, we get some plot!
Shadows is... interesting. My main curiousity is were he got that power of his... and why teleporting/whatever that was 1 other person hurt him so much



aizenv3 -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/18/2011 17:44:50)

quote:

Also.. look out for those anime references! :D


Hellyea. Just watched FMA:Brotherhood finale so I'm in need for more anime



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/19/2011 2:41:05)

@Tiger You'll learn a LOT more about Shadows when the time rolls up -Evil Laugh-
@Aizen Moar anime references ON THE WAY! :3

Also, quick notice.. parts wont be up pretty much everyday nao, School an' stuff [:@]



Oddball -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/25/2011 15:14:52)

Chapter 1 is GO!. Can't believe it's been a week since I last updated. ._.

Anyway, Sorry it's a bit short.. I'm short on time and I want too at least get a part out every week

In this installment. Stuff happens, that's about it



Shadows Morgenstern -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (9/28/2011 4:37:19)

I'm getting the feeling that Rayne could be trouble.....XD Dude seriously this tale is going to be AMAZING![:D]



raylas -> RE: Oddball's Tale Discussion! (10/1/2011 14:04:04)

Loving it. It's a little short in parts, but it's gonna be AWSOMENESS.[:D]

Oh, and I have to say if you include a fight scene it's gonna break the epic meter in half like a dry twig. That being said, there are some errors in spelling, I also don't care about that in the least. Still aweshum...



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