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aizenv3 -> (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/24/2011 15:53:51)

A Masterpiece in the Making

Contructive Criticism and Comments are Allowed :-D

Some Notes as to prevent un-necessary commenting

1) Yes, this is linked to my other story.

2) No, Kalanyx and Vladimir will NOT meet one another.

3) In-fact, Kalanyx's time happens a few hundred years priot to Trials and Havoc

Enjoy what I have so far.

~Aizen V.3



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 15:05:48)

Hmmmm me likes



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 15:30:09)

Thanks



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 15:41:09)

You are welcome, when comes next chapter of this and Trials, also a reccomendation, I'd merge this with the thread of Trials and Havoc, so it's easier for your readers, and if you don't do that I'll eat one of your feets :3



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 22:00:00)

o-o Okidokes



Glais -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 22:49:55)

I disagree, keepin em separate would keep discussion exclusive to each story.
But it really wouldn't be too much of a hastle either way.



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/25/2011 22:56:01)

I kno, but Mortarion threatens to eat my feet.

Do you like the story soo far? This time, there will be no Doom or darkness in this one as pertaining to the main antagonist. You will be suprised when you see who it is.



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 5:01:01)

^You got me intrested, but how does it relates to trials and havoc?, and aizen *begins to cut aizen feet*



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 16:31:27)

The events that will happen now, in Dark History, will shape Vlad's path down the road in Trials and Havoc



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 16:55:24)

Hmmm ok *finishs cutting aizen's feet*



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:00:20)

>.>

I don't want the discussion of both stories in the same post. Too much confusion on my half. May I please have back me feet pl0x?



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:07:07)

*burps* too late, sorry, so how would the desisions of a dude who lived hundred years ago shape Vladimir, by the way when i Trials and Havoc of Vladimir next chapter?



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:11:43)

Oh, this is going to have a super strong lasting impression on Vladimir. Believe me. And also, Kalanyx isn't just a dude, he's

spoiler:

Going to become the first Primal DragonLord



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:14:49)

uhhh intresting, but how could vladimir find out about Kalanyx, also would a demonic feet suffice for the one that I cutt?



aizenv3 -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:16:41)

1) Can't say for now. That answer will be provided in The Second Trial (probably Chpater 9 in Trials and Havoc) if not the near ending of Trials and Havoc

2) Nope. They itch a lot



Mortarion -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (9/26/2011 17:18:25)

How about a hand instead of a feet, you could type faster _-_



Glais -> RE: (DF) Kalanyx's Dark History Commentary (10/1/2011 15:56:23)

Hm...the dialogue seems a little shaky on this story. Almost rushed.

I did find it interesting that they killed the Doctor, wasn't expecting the family to be that....insane.



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