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Mritha -> =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/13/2012 18:40:53)

All commentary for stories and poetry inspired by the war goes here! WriteOn soldiers!

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Razen -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/13/2012 22:09:10)

Well, I've started my story...and found a new wonderful text color. :D

San, I think the last line doesn't really fit the flow of the poem, it really throws it off. If you know poetry or rhythm, that's not good.




Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/14/2012 20:32:04)

Well, I've made my submission. And I think I'm just determined to prove that it is very possible to be too descriptive. And, Mritha, I'm sorry for the double post. I don't know how that happened and for some reason can't delete either of them. Could you please delete the first one?

Edit: Thanks, Mritha!




Mritha -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/14/2012 20:40:39)

You are very welcome Gin :)

And I didn't think there was too much description, I enjoyed reading it. I had never thought of how the primal elements were used and interchangeable with the hero's dragon; or how any of the elements were interchangeable at all to be honest.




Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/14/2012 20:48:19)

@Mritha: Actually it was supposed to be a different story entirely. Then it rewrote itself. Beacuse I never thought of the interchangability of the elements, either.




Kinzdor -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/18/2012 17:38:09)

I added,some Daily Dragons,and a poem to the post.




Lady_Dragonrider -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/18/2012 22:03:00)

Loved your story Gingkage!
I posted a poem. Might do more later.




Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/19/2012 3:05:01)

Thanks, Lady_Dragonrider.




Varen6398 -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/19/2012 12:55:31)

I will have a story about The Celestial Guardians fighting by the end of this war! I will hopefully finish it sometime this week...




Dragonman -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/19/2012 22:10:29)

I love all the stories I've read great job guys!




Varen6398 -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/20/2012 15:35:08)

Posted a fail of a poem. Comment if you wish.




Lady_Dragonrider -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/20/2012 16:22:45)

@Varen6398 I liked it, it was nice

I posted a story, don't know how far I'll get with it.




Varen6398 -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/21/2012 13:15:26)

Made a song.[:)] It sort of works to the tune...




Kinzdor -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/21/2012 15:55:30)

Love the poem.and the song Varen. I wrote,a second part to my story,but it didn`t fit in well with the first part so I scrapped it.




NecroticAuthor -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/23/2012 8:00:36)

I am working on a story for the Rift War, but won't be finished with it before the war is over. Seeing as I just started on it. If this thread is deleted before I complete it, I will most likely post it in the Legends and Lore section.

Anyhoo, I love the poems. ^_^




Mritha -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/23/2012 12:25:43)

@NecroticAuthor, This thread will not be deleted, so no worries :)




Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/26/2012 4:09:16)

Lady_Dragonrider, may I ask which one of my two stories it was that you liked? By the time I saw that you said you liked it, I had two posted.




Kinzdor -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/26/2012 16:07:54)

I thought they were two parts of one story. Not two separate story's.




Lady_Dragonrider -> RE: =DF= Rift War Poetry and Stories Commentary (1/26/2012 21:29:59)

I liked them both, but the last one was my favorite, I loved all the stuff about fate, and how the hero fights partly because if they don't, some one else will.

Chapter 2 is posted.




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