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Mortarion -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 20:46:34)

Hmm intresting, you should put that back here




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 20:55:41)

spoiler:

Vladimir finally kills Kathool but looses his left arm in the process. He laid down next to Kathool's body and mistakenly absorbs Kathool's madness. Then he has a Jekyll and Hyde moment when he becomes a figure named only "Gastraphetes". Gastraphetes attempts to fight Kazimir, in which the latter is defeated. However, he's swiftly defeated by Lala + Radomir. Surprisingly, Vladimir's teacher arrives after hearing about Vladimir's process in eliminating the SS virus. Vladimir's teacher, Vice Fennel, attempts to cure Vladimir but fails. However, he knows of someone who can. His name is Dmitri Greystorm, a Categomancer *Storm Magic User*. Dmitri eventually splits Gastraphetes from Vladimir and the former runs into the sea.


Those three new names are the new characters who you'll meet in upcoming chapters




Mortarion -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 20:58:52)

Hmm intresting, whath appened to my character?




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:07:21)

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Mortarion had absorbed Kathool physically, becoming a Super Adept. He mortally wounds Vladimir. Vladimir then dies but it is revealed that Kathool's intentions were to destroy him, with Vladimir only protecting him. Mortarion now serves Gastraphetes.


Kinda sad, really.




Mortarion -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:09:57)

Hmm intresting, I'll have to talk with Aizen about this, could you tell him to send me a mail? And thanks for your time, I uess that if Gastraphetes will appear, Mortarion too will make a cameo




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:14:19)

Not really.

spoiler:

Gastraphetes kills everything and anything with Kathool's genes. He commits a genocide, killing every living KAA and other members of the army. Mortarion is the sole-survivor of Kathool's empire. Gastraphetes hates Mortarion, and often leaves him wandering




Mortarion -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:18:57)

Then why does Mortarion serves him? And how did he survived? Also, answer me in a PM so we don't spam this more




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:26:17)

@glais

Awaiting your reaction before I post the next Chapter's title




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/17/2012 21:47:00)

Interesting, these crossovers and whatnot. Though I don't think...anyways.
spoiler:

Well, it didn't end how I expected anyway. Odd, Gastraphetes, as Aizen tended to use...Nordic(?) names. How did the crisis on the Necro planet resolve I wonder? Sepulchure was all crazy and whatnot.




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 12:52:44)

Chapter three is complete




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 14:30:41)

quote:

"No, you're too willing to die. Instead, you will be my King."

...

Anyways, kinda cool to see the Romanovs involved (WHICH MEANS RADOMIR >:D).




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 14:33:26)

Starting the next chapter 5-ish.

Oh believe me, you'd rather die than be her King.

Anything else intrigue/terrify/annoy you?




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 14:37:14)

Just that. But then I considered she is probably completely insane, so her NOT killing him was in-character.

About the only thing I'm really against at the point is Alaric's involvement in RavenLoss's plot and Vaal being in his family. Besides that errthang seems to be going smoothly.
Terrify? Heh, you'll have to do a lot more than that :P




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 14:40:41)

You want to be terrified?

The next chapter will be soo morbid your children will have nightmares, and their children too. You've been warned ;D




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 14:50:39)

If you want. But of course that would...
spoiler:

Imply that morbid is what makes me tick :P




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 15:05:54)

Not in that sense, but in the "disturbing" sense of morbid




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 15:08:38)

There's a very, VERY specific thing that scares me. Just because it isn't THAT thing, it won't bother me no matter how horrifying.




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 15:09:54)

Care to say what it is? *not like it can be incorporated into the story* :p




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 15:15:23)

it can't.
And it's this SCP-106

Things intended to be scarier than it don't bother me. 106 is literally...the only thing I'm scared of.




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 15:32:06)

I think ill be doing a bit of these chapter preview things a bit more often, but only if it's an important chapter.

Chapter 4 Preview

spoiler:

Alaric sat uncomfortably as Radomir completely devoured a container full of strange-looking fruits and vegetables. Lala giggled as she noticed Alaric's expression.

"Radomir likes to eat. A lot. Don't worry about him eating you or anything."

"Why would he eat me?" Radomir sniffed Alaric's head.

"You smell like fresh apples and asparagus. What do you taste like?" Alaric tried to get up but Lala laughed.

"He's joking Alaric. No need to run away." Radomir laughed.

"Who said I was joking? Drop your guard and I'll eat you like sushi." The room grew quiet before Radomir laughed. "I'm joking."

"You're kinda cute Alaric. You probably have some girl crushing on you." Alaric then thought of Rebecca's near confession, then her pointing a gun to his head.

"No I don't. Trust me." Lala got up and sat next to Alaric, hanging an arm around him.

"We're gonna get along real nice then." Vladimir walked in, holding a wakizashi in hand.

"So this Scarlet Nightdawn woman is a Doom deity? I'd like to cut her open."

"You hate her that much?" Alaric asked. Vladimir shook his head.

"For experimenting of course. I don't even know the blasted woman. However, that face is familiar." Radomir raised a hand as he took a bite out of the metal container.

"You don't think its....no. It couldn't be..."




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 21:00:03)

Chapter 4 is complete




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 21:18:35)

quote:

"There was a legend, that the greatest Darkness dragon ever to exist is under Swordhaven

Sounds oddly close to LordKaho's Innocentius Dragon...




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 21:22:22)

What's that?




Glais -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 21:26:48)

The Inquisition's founder Innocentius' Dragon, it's under the Inquisition of something similar.




VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft Commentary (6/20/2012 21:30:01)

Meh, its a coincidence. Maybe Aizen knows




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