C&C. (AQW) The Goals of Chaos

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Helixi -> C&C. (AQW) The Goals of Chaos (4/29/2012 17:04:51)
Here it is. Comment away guys! :D

Kinzdor -> RE: C&C. (AQW) The Goals of Chaos (4/30/2012 6:48:01)
The story has a lot of potential, but right now it ain`t really meeting up to it. The main issues are the grammar errors, and the fact that the chapters feel mixed up and short. Some parts of them are rather confusing, and are hard to follow.

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