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Shadowlight1 -> (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/15/2012 22:57:46)

Here's the story. Discuss here.

I'm not entirely sure about my ability as a writer, but feedback would be nice. If my story is hardly read, I'll stop posting, of course.

If anyone feels that a deeper backstory is required, just tell me here.
~Eclipse

Repaired a broken link! -Faerdin



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/16/2012 11:59:58)

Hmm interesting, you`r story's have such depth. To bad you never finished you`r first one. I wonder if Stargate will be involved in this story at all, since you`r char is an honorary member of Stargate. Also I`m getting the family Eclipse `s family may not be all that too safe.



Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/16/2012 21:00:48)

I like it...also enjoy my little role. Heh heh heh...ah trains...love em...heh heh tieing damsels to tracks...tieing trains to tracks as oncoming damsels are a chargings.


WHOO HOO...HOO HOO HOO HA HA HA HA H AHA!


Like the struggle of control between Eclipse and Lunerox



vulkan -> RE: (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/17/2012 4:29:25)

i like it. lunarox is a interesting character.

is the cyberspace bit referring to that part on the forums where clown cloned himself?



Shadowlight1 -> RE: (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/17/2012 13:53:07)

Yes it is.

Referring back to an event that took place on a discussion thread (one that was deleted, I might add) is a bit risky, but it doesn't have much impact on the story.

All readers need to know is that the event got Lunarox trapped in another dimension.
~Eclipse



vulkan -> RE: (HS) The Origin of the Universe Discussion (6/26/2012 5:04:37)

good second part, even if it was pretty small. im looking foward to what happens next.



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