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UnderSoul -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 2:17:20)

@Winter Great so far. Did you ever read mine?



The Winter Knight -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 4:06:56)

No chance yet, but I will.



hict98 -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 5:06:26)

@Falerin No. Why is it over now. Man I can't wait for more. I guess what I'm trying to say is that it is really good and I can't wait for the rest. I do have one question though. Why are one of the goldwings named silver?



Trainz_07 -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 11:04:16)

Next chapter is still underway, regrettably I haven't been able to write a lot as I'm currently in the midst of chinese new year celebrations. In any case I will try my utmost to write more.



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 14:36:33)

And the Third chapter of my story is up, post #24 Memoir 3: The good, the bad and the Paladins! :P



She Ratchet! -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 20:34:49)

Finally got the next part of my story up. Sorry it took forever, I didn't have the chance to write. :/

In this chapter, Lord Scorpio takes on the first of the Paladins!



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 20:43:40)

Looks like the next part will have to wait a while... too much to do, too little time to do it.



tronicx -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/11/2013 22:17:57)

@muchiha when do i come into the story?



Muchiha -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/12/2013 13:26:12)

@tronicx: Double checked my inbox and I think I may have missed your message. Expect my next upload (with your character) as early as tomorrow (February 13) or as late as in Thursday evening (February 14) It just depends how busy I am this week.



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/12/2013 21:19:36)

And another delay to Part XII: Holy... seems almost like it is cursed, odd considering the name.[&:][:-][8|]



The Winter Knight -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/12/2013 23:10:12)

Read Undersouls War Story. I quite like it, it's short and to the point.I would only say that a little more detail would be nice, though isn't very needed. IT would add some depth.



UnderSoul -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/12/2013 23:39:43)

@Winter Thank you. I have finished my story, so I must decline your other request to be added in.



Trainz_07 -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/13/2013 7:25:37)

@Elryn Superb authorship as usual, I really enjoy your portrayal of all things magical in your story, and you really reeled me in with that epic spell =)



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/13/2013 19:33:31)

Part XII:Holy is up! yays! Longest write time yet... oh well only two parts left and it will be done.



She Ratchet! -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/13/2013 19:36:05)

Part Five of mah war story is up!
After the Paladins defeat at Dathnell, it's time to call in the big guns... [:-]



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/14/2013 21:22:10)

Part XIII: DOOM... will have to wait until tomorrow, had to switch to a computer that hates copying and pasting...[:(]



Tep Itaki -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/15/2013 18:15:31)

I have to say, all these stories are really great! I'll get the reviews up and running after updating my story a bit.



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/15/2013 23:44:33)

Not posting anything tonight... annoying internet problems and sibbilings taking over the co.puter the instant i get started. *sigh* It does not help that my mom and grandma always take their side so they get what they want.



Tep Itaki -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 0:25:26)

To those of you still interested, my war story has been updated. A Dire Situation. Please take a read and tell me what you think. Thank you.

@kors: I hope it gets solved. Your story also caught my attention.

EDIT: Forgot to mention. Sorry Elryn but I had to borrow your writing style for a bit >.< please forgive me but it was the only way to pull off the transformation in a totally epic way >.>;;



Trainz_07 -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 8:36:31)

@Tep Itaki

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Her conditions has stabilized


have

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removing the residue impurities


Perhaps residual would be a more apt word?

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I will be in my shop if her condition worsen


Worsens

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A day had gone by since Artimix arrived late at night to Warlic's shop


Should be at, since you used arrived

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Artimix fought every cell in his body, screaming to stop Warlic from causing her pain


Hmm...you are referring to how his cells are screaming for Warlic to stop right? I suggest writing something like this: ...fought every cell in his body as they screamed for him to stop Warlic...

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Warlic's voice was monotone


Monotonous


Ahem, it was indeed a short chapter; nonetheless I enjoyed reading it, I really admire the familial theme that's been recurring through your chapters. The bond between the siblings really helps pull the story together and it's really endearing.



Muchiha -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 12:41:02)

Hey guys, so with Mid-Term exams coming up for me (Top priority right now) I won't be able to give a decent conclusion for this story until next week, and final reviews until 2 weeks from now. Kors, Heroes of the Scape, + tronicx you guys will be coming next Chapter with any Paladins (popinloopy, The White Knight, hict98, flashbang etc.) coming in after.

So sorry for the inconvenience, I just didn't how fast this war would speed up this week.

Thank you guys for your patience.



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 17:39:24)

Part XIII: DOOM... is unlive! I have greatly changed this part from what I originally planned, I had to cut a few things to keep up with the pace of the war but the next part should come today or tonight. It is going to be much shorter than the others, or so I hope. Also this is now the longest part in my story. 3.5 pages according to google docs, which brings the total page count to 24.37 pages and 11588 words.



Tep Itaki -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 18:56:13)

A new chapter in my war story has been put up, To Each Their Battle. Please tell me what you think of it. Reviews are greatly welcomed. Now to possibly move on to reviews., unless something gets it's claws into me.

Thank you.

EDIT: Wait...need to add something into the story first.

EDIT2: Done!

EDIT 3: Okay...so many edits...[:'(]



Cataclysm -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 20:08:49)

My next part is up. I apologize for the waiting - Elryn and I have had many issues as far as having the time available to write goes. I intended to do more writing, but it's been a hectic couple of weeks for me. Elryn requested me to tell you he will put his version up sometime soon.



kors -> RE: =AQ= Edge of Extinction War Stories and Poems Commentary (2/16/2013 20:12:59)

And it is done! Part XIV: Victory is Bittersweet... is a bittersweet victory now. It is done and it is the longest single story I have written and finished. Ever. Reviews on the whole thing will be greatly appreciated. Sorry for dropping a bridge on all of you in my story! Well except for Undersoul's character, he made just barely survived.



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