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0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/30/2013 21:00:30)

Thank you for your permission tomyy2468. I'm just warning you that I read the story you gave to Hikari Yume and how he started ( This is where you are allowed to tell your character's story) and I'm going to give it an end. I also think Kilvakar would like to, why don't you pm him?



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 16:00:07)

I have currently written the eighth chapter and I am working on the ninth. The former is VERY lengthy and I am going to be making the ninth chapter as long if not longer.

I will not have them up for a while though because the internet in my area has been going haywire due to storms (the first ones I have seen in years!)

(P.S. Not even sure whether this will get posted on correctly because the internet has been going on and off the past few days)



flashbang -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 16:43:35)

My gawd... so much catching up to do. Curse you guys for writing so fast! Curse myself for being lazy!



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 18:58:55)

I need to say, I just realize how awfully written and poorly explained my last comment was. I wasn't talking about killing tommy2468's character off nor would I do so without his consent. All I have to say in here is that I'm grateful to tommy2468 for granting me permission of developing a continuation of his character's life that only applies in my war history. This interpretation of Hikari Yume is just going to be used in my war story. It has nothing to do with whatever tommy2468 decides would be the REAL continuation of his character.




popinloopy -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 20:20:15)

Oh and just so that we are all clear, is there anyone here who does NOT want to be in my story?



Elryn -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 21:42:05)

I would suggest posting at list to make matters simpler. This way, those that do not want to be part may look at the list and call such out and in reverse those that are not there and wish to join may do the same.



popinloopy -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/31/2013 21:56:44)

@Elryn
Great idea.

hict
flashbang
Elryn
0Neo
tommy
kors
battlemaster
ss2195
darksaber

Pretty much everyone in this thread except those who are gone at the moment.



hict98 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 3:44:12)

@Popinloopy I'm good with being in your story.

Now guys my next chapter is coming up tomorrow... or actually later today. Much later. Like almost midnight. Anyways I might be sending ya'll pm's asking if you are okay with me killing off your character.



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 3:47:59)

CHapter 10: Cyber fall and a new Ally! is up[:D][:D]


BTW, doesnt everyone just Luurve cliffhangers? I dont really know how, but I'm gonna wrap this story up( 3more Chaps) in the next 4 days. My first semester is gonna start on MOnday, and I wont be able to write untill the 8th, BY which time the war will have already begun!

Cheers!

spoiler:



Part 11: Elements Deceived: Xov’s Assault
It will be the largest battle scent I've personally written involving atleast 13 if not more chars!

Stay tuned!


@Hict: Not Seth! Poor bloke's already had the curtains pulled up on him in one of the stories :(



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 3:59:17)

@ss2196 man ss that was just epic you really built up the next chapter well at the end and with that spoiler it looks like the next chapter is going to be epic :)



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 7:16:56)

Gonna attempt to put up chapter 8 but I am sure that my internet will give out in the process. Going to try anyway. Hope for the best [:D]

Yay!! Got the eighth chapter up and it is a very long chapter (14 Word pages long)



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 8:12:21)

wow tommy the battle you are writing is epic and i cant wait to see the rest of it you did a really good job on this one :D



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 8:17:49)

Thanks darksaber. I don't know whether I should wait a while before uploading the next chapter or to put it up now.

I already have it written but I am thinking that posting two chapters that are around 1/3 of my total war story might be a bit too much.

The next chapter has (in my opinion) the best battle yet. So the choice is up to you guys :) Would you prefer to see it today, or wait a while?



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 8:22:15)

@tommy well how about wait that way you can give people time to read this chapter although saying that i am pumped for the next one



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 8:25:09)

That's what I was thinking darksaber and you may be right. It is 11 pages long so it isn't as tough a read as the 8th chapter.

It is also narrated by Adrian and we get to see his true abilities here :P



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 8:27:55)

@tommy well if it isn't as long then i suppose it would be fine although everyone else would have a lot to read



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 9:04:56)

Chapter 11: Xov's assault


spoiler:



Chapter 12: Fall of the Behemoth part 2

Chapter 13: 15 times unlucky

Chapter 14: Date is settled




darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 9:12:54)

@ss well that was a nice and quick read so it looks like the main battle will come soon then by the sound of it although i don't think it will be easy soi am definitely looking forward to what they will be facing



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 9:30:53)

@ss2195 Haha I liked that little conversation between Seth and Sophia XD

I'm glad that you still have a few more chapters in mind. Allows the rest of us to continue reading your great writing :D



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 11:38:21)

@ss2195 Your chapters were amusing to read and quite a good cliffhanger if you hadn't posted the last chapter. My only complaint is my name.....seriously? Oneo? how many times am I going to tell everyone in this place my name is zero Neo, with capital n?

@tommy2468 As always, despair and loss make their way among critical situations that are solved through the power of individuals. I have to say, I love the way you portrait the characters and how you develop the fights. An amazing work

You're giving quite the power to Adrian huh? I also think he has the potential to fight like that....if you read this darksaber22, let me tell you I'm expecting you to become our first official Avatar of Drell.

I have to say now that I plan to write two more chapters before the war starts and, since I'll be busy fighting and stuff that always distract me happen IRL, the last chapters of my story will come after the war is over. Sorry for any inconvenience.



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 11:50:58)

@neo haha i read it :) and if you don't mind me asking what is drell because this is the first time i have heard that name or i might have but forgotten so anyway who is that

never mind i just remembered



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 12:16:16)

@tommy: Lol :D

I have yet to read your new chapter, but I'm currently in the middle of the 12th! Bear patience wimme! :)

@0Neo: I believe ive spelt it 0neo.... My apologies, I'll correct it as soon as I can! :)

Just a mental note, never get 15 chars hacking away truphma lives in one scene....gets insaneously difficult to keep track about who's killing who.
Oh, and 1 of the chars will die, impaled by Xov, while trying to shield a comrade



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 12:22:00)

@ss2195 Thank you for taking the time to correct it....its just that seeing my name wrongly spelled is a bit frustrating. Now you really caught my interest, I want to see who'll die (Seth right?)



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 13:06:57)

With my lack of a stable internet connection I have resorted to writing even more :L Currently writing the tenth chapter. This one is going to have quite a Donnie Darko feel to it.

Lots of talk of rabbits, but don't worry there is no giant creepy bunny appearing from anyway



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/1/2013 14:23:19)

@0Neo: I hear you, most people cannot even say my name, and instead resort to calling me Sad :(

If I change my srname to Lee, it'll be sad lee hilarious



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