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10/28/2011 20:13:43   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 All commentary for the war stories and poems will go here. I can hardly wait to see what crazy and inspiring stories you guys come up with this time :D

Post your war Poems and Stories here!

< Message edited by Mritha -- 10/28/2011 20:25:59 >
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10/28/2011 21:03:09   
Mortarion
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I wonder, will you make a history mrithy
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10/28/2011 21:35:00   
Mritha
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 I might ;) depends on how much time I have.
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10/28/2011 21:36:20   
Mortarion
Member

*tries to do sith mind trick* You'll have time to writte a war history, you'll have time to do a war history........it isn't working, right?
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10/28/2011 22:05:49   
sysdragonfable
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mine is very very short, and the ending isnt much.
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10/28/2011 22:10:31   
Mritha
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 I liked it a lot sysdragon! It kind of reminded me of Captain Keys from one of the Halo books as he slowly became one of the flood.
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10/28/2011 22:30:22   
Mortarion
Member

you and your halo references Mrithy, oh rll, everybody is obssesed with something
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10/28/2011 22:31:27   
deather98
Member

mines in working progress and as i progress in this war it will be updated on that thread
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10/28/2011 22:51:07   
Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches


 This war, while at a splendid time for me personally, couldn't have come at a worse time literarily (that's a word now, shaddap).

I'm wrapping up Cataclysm: Origins, which is great, but NaNoWriMo is just coming up, and I plan on taking on that challenge, meaning I won't have the time nor the will to write another story. This one isn't even getting me in, unfortunately. I wish I could, but circumstances permit me not.
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10/29/2011 10:11:51   
Kinzdor
Member

I just posted mine. What do you think?
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10/29/2011 11:05:50   
Mritha
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 @deather, Your story was good, but I recommend using more punctuation to make is easier to understand. Specifically periods and commas.

@kinz, Yours was good too, I liked the motivational speech at the end :)
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10/29/2011 11:12:18   
Mortarion
Member

You know what I'd like Mrithy? That you make a history :D, I might also make a history
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10/29/2011 11:30:47   
deather98
Member

thanks mritha i had posted it while i was half asleep and fighting. plus dealing with few things rl so might be awhile before i can edit it.
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10/29/2011 15:13:15   
sysdragonfable
Member

quote:

I liked it a lot sysdragon! It kind of reminded me of Captain Keys from one of the Halo books as he slowly became one of the flood.


Thanks. Am thinking of writing another as I cant get past my archenemy Writers Block for the book I am writing. Havnt even started and Writers Block is kickin my butt(I feel childish saying butt).

@Deather98@Kinzvlle I liked your stories but could you do me one small favor? Could you perhaps space out the lines a little? Not saying each one but every four lines or so. Read the same line twice and I went "What the hell, did he just put the same line twice?" Not thats it a bad thing it just makes it easier for people to read. Common mistake.
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10/29/2011 23:16:50   
nield
Creative!


 Wrote a little ditty
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10/30/2011 12:33:43   
sysdragonfable
Member

Wrote a little ditty(looks up) dang already taken!

Wrote a little story.
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10/31/2011 8:28:46   
bulbaman1
Member

I hope mine was good. If there is one thing I love, it is writing Artix Entertainment stories.
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10/31/2011 22:32:59   
sysdragonfable
Member

Wrote another one(I should really write a poem...) now before you read it I suggest you read THIS because the main character is from a character from a book I am writing. Nothing serious like "I wanna publish this to penguin" no no, just something I do on the side to pass the time. Obviously there is not much detail in Creature(not even his name...) but this pretty much shows the "can take on anyone" kinda character I made him. Why I did that you ask? Major writers block and I thought write something that involved him may get me past the writers block wall *Crosses fingers*. Feedback is apprieciated.

@bulbaman1 your story was pretty darn good. I liked how you used the chronomancer class into the story as other have not(used ingame classes), and you used the dragon which again others have not(I tried but failed). So kudos to you sir! Now I really need to start writing something else besides zardbie war things...
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10/31/2011 23:18:22   
Faerdin
Rune Knight


 I'm kind of tired, so this isn't really my best work, but I attempted to write a rather short story depicting the helplessness of Doomwood's inhabitants. After all, not everyone is a Hero.
Everyone's writings have been absolutely amazing so far.. it is nice to see more than mere bloodshed in wars. Do not lose hope; let's drive these Zardbies back, people!

< Message edited by Faerdin -- 11/1/2011 1:21:34 >
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11/1/2011 0:21:45   
Kinzdor
Member

Added more to my story.
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11/3/2011 19:47:21   
Dragonman
Member

I've been putting my LNN on the stories, I hope you guys enjoy them as much as I do. :D
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11/4/2011 14:39:43   
Kinzdor
Member

I have posted my Daily Dragons!
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11/4/2011 16:26:29   
Dragonman
Member

Lol the croft reach radios and Daily dratgoons too, fun to read, seems lke I started a trend :P
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