tecreatoromega
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I was going through the books in the rip in the sky, and noticed something in the blue book on the bookshelf, titled "The Fisherman." On page 7, right at the bottom of the page (if the scroll bar is all the way to the top) it says "A row of statues stood facing out onto the ocean, each with s solemn look spread..." This should probably say each with a solemn look. I also love how you tied Jacques into the elemental orb saga, but that is unrelated. I thought I would let you know of this minor typo. A second typo (I believe...) is located in the same book on page 13. If the scroll bar is located as high as it can go, about halfway through the page lies the text "You may join me here if you wish, for I can give you the gift of Aerdu..." Should this be Aerodu? Or the gift of Aerodu? Aerdu is missing the o that should come between the r and d. Either choice is alright with me, and this may have been intentional, but it is inconsistent with the relationships between the other clan leaders and the name of their gifts earlier in the story. Another typo, in the green book about Pae, on the 28th page in the first paragraph, lies the text "Still they not had a Gecko to study." Should this be "Still they had not had a Gecko to study? I don't know what is correct here, but I am fairly certain that the current one is incorrect. Maybe "Still, they'd not had a Gecko to study." Another typo lies in the same book on page 30, at the very bottom. "Yes, but...anyway... How do you eat? Reptilians of your king eat insects." Should this be Reptilians of your kind? Cheers~ -Tec All fixed! Log out/in to get the fixes. Thanks! ~IMR
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