Home  | Login  | Register  | Help  | Play 

Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes | Comments

  		Logged in as: Guest
  Printable Version
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes | Comments
Page 1 of 712345>»
Forum Login
Message << Older Topic   Newer Topic >>
7/15/2008 14:20:35   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 The poems are here.

Comments are greatly appreciated.

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 3/2/2009 15:40:12 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 1
7/22/2008 17:54:41   
~Shade~
Member

I was looking around C&C, and while scanning threads, I noticed something.

Poor Cow Face HAS NO COMMENTS!

GASPETH!

So, I decided to come here and say a bit.

First of all, my favorite was Poem for the Future. Great meaning, and very impacting. The world really is turning into a bunch of sleazebags, huh?

Everything else was pretty good, except for Red, White, and Grey.

It was AWESOME! My second favorite, this poem uses colors to describe a horrible and senseless battle.

Good job!

~Shade~
Post #: 2
7/29/2008 15:09:37   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Thank you very much, Shade, sorry I didn't notice your comment earlier.

Two more poems posted. Here's the link to the first one, If I Weren't Blind, Angel. It's my first ever attempt at a romantic poem, so... Sorry if it's bad.

The other is Think And Question, Then Repeat. Much more my usual style, inspired by the name for my poetry thread.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 3
8/14/2008 15:55:39   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 New poem.

I Take My Leave (Of This Place)
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 4
8/26/2008 16:42:27   
Elnaith
Member

Heya Cow Face!

I really like your poems, they really bring their message on beautifally, although some are more song lyrics than poems in my opinion (Ofcourse, they are kind of interchangeable.)

I especially like your first one, although with this one I did get more of a song in my head, but that could also jsut be because the flow is very good!

I'm never much of a romantic poem-reader (Though I do try to write em sometimes), so I don't really like your Angel one, 1 thing that kind of sprang out was the use of "thee" (Old-Enlish/romantic language) followed by dunno, which kind of shatters the image.

Do keep up the awesome work though,

- El
AQ DF  Post #: 5
8/27/2008 13:55:47   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Greetings, fellow AiT! And thank-you for the comment. As mentioned on IRC to you- repeated here for the benefit of others- some of them are songs. Good point on If I Weren't Blind, too, I'll change that.

Other business: New poem, Revolution.

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 8/27/2008 13:56:17 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 6
8/27/2008 15:46:12   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Another new item: A song, Quicksilver. My friends and I are starting a band under the same name, so I wrote this song. I'm not entirely satisfied with it, so criticism is greatly appreciated.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 7
9/2/2008 13:53:00   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Writer, a poem I wrote on the weekend, is up. It's meant to be a humorous poem, in that it greatly overdramatizes the subject.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 8
9/18/2008 16:06:38   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 New poem... Though I'm not satisfied with this one either. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=14778678
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 9
9/29/2008 17:05:01   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Sin, Alive

New poem, yay!
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 10
10/1/2008 11:30:12   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Crusade is written.

This is the longest- and probably best- poem that I have ever written, and I hope that you all enjoy it. It's about the end of the first Crusade.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 11
10/6/2008 9:26:44   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 New poem! Memoriam, Only In Joy Weep.

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 11/2/2009 11:28:28 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 12
10/6/2008 13:50:23   
.::oDrew
Member

Once again, I love the theme of your newest poem.

The "tone" seems to vary a bit, though - I can't decide if it's supposed to be Ye Olde English-type language, or more modern. I know it's just a tiny thing, but part of the reason I'm confused lies in "it's" vs. "it is." If you are, indeed, going for the Olde English thing, perhaps you could consider the use of "'tis'?" (<- Wow, talk about nightmares in punctuation. e_e") But yeah, contractions in general tend to "modernize" language.

< Message edited by TEH RAWRZ -- 10/6/2008 13:52:11 >
Post #: 13
10/7/2008 10:27:30   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Er... Are you talking about Memoriam, Only In Joy Weep? If so, I wasn't going for Middle English at all...
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 14
10/7/2008 14:51:57   
.::oDrew
Member

Er, yes I was.

And in that case, never mind. e_e;
Post #: 15
10/14/2008 9:15:22   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Awright, new poem. Red Soil of Serfdom

Oh, and this is not supposed to be in Medieval syntax. =)

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 10/27/2008 13:23:26 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 16
10/15/2008 13:43:51   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Shifting, a new (but very short) poem that I wrote based on the story I'm currently writing, even though it's been a couple of weeks since I last did anything on it. I might eventually lengthen the poem, but for now I'm leaving it as-is.

Other junk: I added periods where they were needed in A Poem For The Future, since I just now realized that I had left them out.

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 11/2/2009 11:29:11 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 17
10/17/2008 10:32:03   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Drop is up.

Another poem, yay!
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 18
10/20/2008 12:03:13   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Black Monday King

Another narrative poem, this one is about a man who rises from feral beginnings to become the hero of beggars and cripples.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 19
10/27/2008 12:44:28   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Two new poems, On Top and Night Of My Soul.

I'm working on a third currently, based on the fact that I learned a few hours ago that my friend is in the hospital with meningitis.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 20
10/27/2008 13:39:24   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 A dark new poem is up, Compassion Lost.

I'd rather not trouble everyone with the story behind it, but if you would like an explanation, please private message me.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 21
11/7/2008 11:06:55   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 New poem, As Lovely As A What?.

It's not my best, but it's at least whimsical.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 22
11/10/2008 11:07:23   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Hmm, another rather whimsical poem, Could Be Worse!

The story behind it makes it more amusing.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 23
11/11/2008 16:02:09   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


 Thanks Given

A Thanksgiving-themed poem that I wrote for school today.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 24
11/11/2008 16:44:34   
Arthur The Brave One
Member

Awww... poor Cow Face! Despite the fact you have, like, the coolest title ever, 'most all your posts are by yourself! :(
Just kinda dropped by to say I think you are a good poet, and stuff... not enough time to give real feedback... :(
Will drop by later to butcher a bit :)

/Arthur
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 25
Page:   [1] 2 3 4 5   next >   >>
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes | Comments
Page 1 of 712345>»
Jump to:



Advertisement




Icon Legend
New Messages No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages Locked w/o New Messages
 Post New Thread
 Reply to Message
 Post New Poll
 Submit Vote
 Delete My Own Post
 Delete My Own Thread
 Rate Posts




Forum Content Copyright © 2018 Artix Entertainment, LLC.

"AdventureQuest", "DragonFable", "MechQuest", "EpicDuel", "BattleOn.com", "AdventureQuest Worlds", "Artix Entertainment"
and all game character names are either trademarks or registered trademarks of Artix Entertainment, LLC. All rights are reserved.
PRIVACY POLICY


Forum Software © ASPPlayground.NET Advanced Edition