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Cow Face -> Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (7/15/2008 14:20:35)
The poems are here. Comments are greatly appreciated.

~Shade~ -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (7/22/2008 17:54:41)
I was looking around C&C, and while scanning threads, I noticed something. Poor Cow Face HAS NO COMMENTS! GASPETH! So, I decided to come here and say a bit. First of all, my favorite was Poem for the Future. Great meaning, and very impacting. The world really is turning into a bunch of sleazebags, huh? Everything else was pretty good, except for Red, White, and Grey. It was AWESOME! My second favorite, this poem uses colors to describe a horrible and senseless battle. Good job! ~Shade~

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (7/29/2008 15:09:37)
Thank you very much, Shade, sorry I didn't notice your comment earlier. Two more poems posted. Here's the link to the first one, If I Weren't Blind, Angel. It's my first ever attempt at a romantic poem, so... Sorry if it's bad. The other is Think And Question, Then Repeat. Much more my usual style, inspired by the name for my poetry thread.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (8/14/2008 15:55:39)
New poem. I Take My Leave (Of This Place)

Elnaith -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (8/26/2008 16:42:27)
Heya Cow Face! I really like your poems, they really bring their message on beautifally, although some are more song lyrics than poems in my opinion (Ofcourse, they are kind of interchangeable.) I especially like your first one, although with this one I did get more of a song in my head, but that could also jsut be because the flow is very good! I'm never much of a romantic poem-reader (Though I do try to write em sometimes), so I don't really like your Angel one, 1 thing that kind of sprang out was the use of "thee" (Old-Enlish/romantic language) followed by dunno, which kind of shatters the image. Do keep up the awesome work though, - El

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (8/27/2008 13:55:47)
Greetings, fellow AiT! And thank-you for the comment. As mentioned on IRC to you- repeated here for the benefit of others- some of them are songs. Good point on If I Weren't Blind, too, I'll change that. Other business: New poem, Revolution.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (8/27/2008 15:46:12)
Another new item: A song, *Quicksilver*. My friends and I are starting a band under the same name, so I wrote this song. I'm not entirely satisfied with it, so criticism is greatly appreciated.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (9/2/2008 13:53:00)
Writer, a poem I wrote on the weekend, is up. It's meant to be a humorous poem, in that it greatly overdramatizes the subject.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (9/18/2008 16:06:38)
New poem... Though I'm not satisfied with this one either. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=14778678

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (9/29/2008 17:05:01)
Sin, Alive New poem, yay!

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/1/2008 11:30:12)
Crusade is written. This is the longest- and probably best- poem that I have ever written, and I hope that you all enjoy it. It's about the end of the first Crusade.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/6/2008 9:26:44)
New poem! Memoriam, Only In Joy Weep.

.::oDrew -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/6/2008 13:50:23)
Once again, I love the theme of your newest poem. The "tone" seems to vary a bit, though - I can't decide if it's supposed to be Ye Olde English-type language, or more modern. I know it's just a tiny thing, but part of the reason I'm confused lies in "it's" vs. "it is." If you are, indeed, going for the Olde English thing, perhaps you could consider the use of "'tis'?" (<- Wow, talk about nightmares in punctuation. e_e") But yeah, contractions in general tend to "modernize" language.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/7/2008 10:27:30)
Er... Are you talking about Memoriam, Only In Joy Weep? If so, I wasn't going for Middle English at all...

.::oDrew -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/7/2008 14:51:57)
Er, yes I was. And in that case, never mind. e_e;

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/14/2008 9:15:22)
Awright, new poem. Red Soil of Serfdom Oh, and this is not supposed to be in Medieval syntax. =)

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/15/2008 13:43:51)
Shifting, a new (but very short) poem that I wrote based on the story I'm currently writing, even though it's been a couple of weeks since I last did anything on it. I might eventually lengthen the poem, but for now I'm leaving it as-is. Other junk: I added periods where they were needed in A Poem For The Future, since I just now realized that I had left them out.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/17/2008 10:32:03)
Drop is up. Another poem, yay!

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/20/2008 12:03:13)
Black Monday King Another narrative poem, this one is about a man who rises from feral beginnings to become the hero of beggars and cripples.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/27/2008 12:44:28)
Two new poems, On Top and Night Of My Soul. I'm working on a third currently, based on the fact that I learned a few hours ago that my friend is in the hospital with meningitis.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (10/27/2008 13:39:24)
A dark new poem is up, Compassion Lost. I'd rather not trouble everyone with the story behind it, but if you would like an explanation, please private message me.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (11/7/2008 11:06:55)
New poem, As Lovely As A What?. It's not my best, but it's at least whimsical.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (11/10/2008 11:07:23)
Hmm, another rather whimsical poem, Could Be Worse! The story behind it makes it more amusing.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (11/11/2008 16:02:09)
Thanks Given A Thanksgiving-themed poem that I wrote for school today.

Arthur The Brave One -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat If Desired \| Comments (11/11/2008 16:44:34)
Awww... poor Cow Face! Despite the fact you have, like, the coolest title ever, 'most all your posts are by yourself! :( Just kinda dropped by to say I think you are a good poet, and stuff... not enough time to give real feedback... :( Will drop by later to butcher a bit :) /Arthur

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