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Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (10/2/2009 12:23:53)
Very high praise; I really appreciate it! Thanks very much, as always. :D Update - Abstract In Solitude Minor

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (10/19/2009 12:21:45)
Returning from vacation with an update! Fallen Short - An odd poem, written from the point-of-view of some random fictitious character...

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (11/4/2009 11:58:54)
Silly update - The Togs of War

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (12/18/2009 9:44:50)
Update - One of my favorite of my own poems to date, but also one of the oddest in terms of formatting. Inspired (by the tune of) "Blue," by Serj Tankian. An Entreaty To The World

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (1/5/2010 10:51:41)
Update - A poem about discovering one's faults, and coming to accept, and to change, them. Human Again

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (1/6/2010 10:29:37)
A (sort-of-a) love poem written for a very dear friend of mine, who is honestly one of my reasons to live. Malleable

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (2/18/2010 12:11:40)
Update - The Fighting Coward, a semi-narrative poem about someone who's squandered their time in this world.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (3/8/2010 16:37:43)
Update - I, a revision of a poem I wrote a looong time ago. Much better now, if even more abstract and crazeh.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (3/11/2010 9:41:38)
Update - Shadow In Their Eyes. The subject should be pretty clear when you read it (assuming you do, in fact, read it). Possibly one of my best works to date; I actually got a little choked up when reading it aloud.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (3/29/2010 12:00:34)
Update - Children of War Also, I've merged my freeverse thread, "Blank Faced" with this thread!

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (4/20/2010 11:19:46)
Update from over Spring Break: Fear, a poem about... ... you know what it's about.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (4/23/2010 13:49:17)
Update - Look To Me. In my usual genre of alienation of the individual.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (6/1/2010 14:34:30)
Update - Factory, an odd little narrative poem.

Shreder -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (6/1/2010 14:56:49)
Read through a couple of your more recent poems. Excellent as always CF! [;)]

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (6/10/2010 13:29:10)
Many thanks! :D Update - One Step Forward, One Step Back, a poem more along the lines of my first works.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (7/16/2010 10:09:56)
Update - Leave Me Be - Yet another breaking-out poem. Why do the majority of my poem ideas come to me in the bathtub?

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (9/16/2010 11:41:19)
Update - Untitled, a fiction poem about a relationship that went horribly, horribly wrong. (The title is "Untitled.")

Hallie Slidepath -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (9/16/2010 23:01:10)
The first time I read Untitled I misread a word that made me misunderstand it... the next time I read it I noticed my mistake, and then the poem made much more sense. I really, really like your style, it feels almost otherwordly. It's easy understand the stories you tell in your poems without the descriptions always being straightforward, if that makes any sense :P I've read through a few more of your poems, and I really enjoyed them all. I think I found mehself a new poet to add to the favorite list. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work ^^

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (9/22/2010 13:54:24)
Ooh, drat, I hadn't noticed you'd made such a nice comment on my poetry. :D Many thanks for the compliments! It means a lot to me to know that someone enjoys my poetry- and particularly that they make sense, hee. Update - Swan Song. More allegory, hooray! Minor edit: It looks like my three most recent poems had too much spacing under the title. >_> So if you notice the "edited" line, anyone who's reading this, nothing's changed (yet). I'm just obsessive about spaces.

Cow Face -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (9/28/2010 12:10:29)
Update - Travels, for lack of a better name. It's mainly just an experiment (for me) in rhyme.

Arthur The Brave One -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (9/30/2010 13:45:21)
You weren't expecting to see me ever again, were you? If you even remember me, that is, but still, here I am, commenting and all! Travels was... interesting, to say the least. Kind shook me up inside, somehow, but I don't even know how. Very well written and all, no comments on that. So I guess we can call that another job well done! I'll be seeing you around, then. (Or probably not, but who knows, I just might return... sometime.)

Shreder -> RE: Think, Question, Repeat (If Desired)/Stripes \| Comments (10/13/2010 2:50:19)
I thought I'd stop by and share my thoughts on what you've posted since I last checked in. One Step Forward, One Step Back: Simple, but the message it contains is solid. Well done. The Forums Are Great: Absolutely hilarious. I had the Discovery version of that song stuck in my head for ages after I first heard it, and you've done a fine job converting it to be about the forums. I especially the section on L&L. :P Trebuchet: I don't exactly get what the point of this poem is, but there's nothing really wrong with it... Leave Me Be: This is one of your better poems, and the lyricism makes it read much like a song. In fact, I found myself half making up a melody for it as I went. :P Untitled: The poem itself is excellent, which in itself contradicts what it says. I like the concept, and I love the execution. Probably the best of your recent poetry. Swan Song: Another fine poem, the flow felt a little bit iffy at times, but that may just be me... Travels: To be harshly honest, not your best. Not that there were any specific problems, but the quality of the piece overall just didn't match up with many of your earlier works like Leave Me Be or Untitled.

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