I just read Hidden Storm. And... I'm impressed. I'm not normally a fan of freeverse, but yours just speaks to me. You make the emotions come alive. Very, /very/, impressive stuff.
I didn't find much to nitpick on in the initial read. I do have a few suggestions here:
When nobody notices your tone has changed,
When nobody notices you give shorter answers,
When nobody notices that you're quicker to snap,
Purely opinion, so feel free to ignore me, but I think "no one" flows better.
Nothing much else to say except I loved it. Extremely good freeverse. Great emotion and concept. Loved these lines especially:
How can you fool them all so well,
When you don't want them to be fooled at all?