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5/8/2009 18:06:09   
Gianna Glow
Member

Hello! Welcome to my Comments Thread for my poetry and free verse. Below are links to all of my poems.

Untitled
I am
Obsession
Unheard
Lifetime
I am
Silence
Small Words
Someday
A Life Unraveled
Real
Where
Too Late?
Why?
The Impossible
Teaching
The Search
Never Again

Well, I hope you have enjoyed my peotry. If you saw anything that needed fixing or you have ideas or you just liked that poem, please comment!
-green_girl02


< Message edited by Gianna Glow -- 2/28/2013 17:21:47 >
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5/8/2009 21:19:31   
Crimzon5
Member

Nice work you've got there. And congrats on your approval.

After reading your stuff, my favorite would be:

quote:

Silent screams,
Unseen tears,
Are covered by the storm.


It's just awesome!



_____________________________


Can you see the Visions?
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5/8/2009 22:54:53   
Gianna Glow
Member

Thanks Crimzon. Glad you enjoyed it. That poem(/song) was a lot of fun to right. I just kinda started singing, and this is what showed up.... with a little editting.

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 5/9/2009 23:51:55 >
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5/9/2009 23:32:14   
Gianna Glow
Member

Just posted a new poem. :) i'm adding a link to the first post. its call 'I am'
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5/13/2009 16:14:09   
Gianna Glow
Member

Just posted a new poem. Its called ' Silence'. I'm adding the link to the top of the page as well as here.

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 5/20/2009 14:21:51 >
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5/20/2009 14:21:39   
Gianna Glow
Member

New poem. slightly darker than some of my normal stuff.... but here it is. Small Words
I hope you enjoy. added the link at top as well. If you have any comments at all, please say so!
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5/20/2009 14:27:02   
Helixi
Member

I like it! The Small Words are the ones that often mean the most or convey the most meaning, I find. The structure is good and your choice of words is excellent. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes and the imagery is wonderful.

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:28:38 >
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5/20/2009 14:31:19   
Gianna Glow
Member

WHOO-HOOO!!! Someone posted!!! anyways... its not "dark", just "darker" than my usual stuff. its less so than my "I am" poem, but thats not all the dark either. I just write what i feel like, so often all spectrums show up. Thanks though Helix! Do you have any suggestions on any of my other works?
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5/20/2009 14:38:22   
Helixi
Member

I only read that. I have a big assignment due Friday so I just read the most recent one. I can cut Hitler out of my life for 15 minutes though. *checks poetry thread*
quote:

condescendence

I don't think thats a word... Other than that, no mistakes. You don't appear to have posted a lot of new poems since English 101, so all the mistakes in the earlier poems got caught and corrected. :)

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:29:42 >
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5/20/2009 16:00:33   
Gianna Glow
Member

nice. Thanks! hmmmm, i'll check on that. i know condescending is a word... but not a root word. Ah-ha! Condescension is the right word! thanks for letting me know about that!

edit-
there, fixed it!

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 5/20/2009 16:03:08 >
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5/20/2009 16:27:24   
Helixi
Member

Goodgood. I have decided to spread the word about this. :D

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:30:22 >
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5/20/2009 16:53:00   
Gianna Glow
Member

awesome! thanks Helix! btw, congrats on ur approval!
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5/21/2009 17:23:16   
Helixi
Member

I was approved long before you! xD

I have sent links to some people I know and they said they would read it. :)

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:30:55 >
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5/22/2009 12:12:26   
Helixi
Member

I guess we're all spreading the word about each others, eh? I sent it to six plus people, along with Brante's work.

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:31:27 >
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5/22/2009 12:17:04   
BrantePyrus
Member

I tell you what- I'll just post links to both of yours on my page. And vice versa. We can work together- after all, our poetry very much shows the spectrum of light, darkness, and the gray between, hope, despair, and resolution.
Heh, maybe I'll even make us a siggy!
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5/22/2009 12:29:10   
Helixi
Member

We actually can't post links on our profile. I'll put them on my thread. :)

< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:31:48 >
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5/22/2009 12:31:05   
BrantePyrus
Member

Thats what I meant. XI.
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5/22/2009 20:28:36   
Gianna Glow
Member

Hey! thanks for all the comments! I would love to be in a 'web' with you guys... but i'm not sure how. you'd have to explain a bit more.
@Helix: I knew you have been approved for a while... but i never told you congrats. better late than never!

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 11/1/2009 21:36:48 >
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5/23/2009 2:59:14   
Helixi
Member

To "web" with us you just need to put links to our poetry threads on your poetry thread. :)
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5/23/2009 11:41:37   
Gianna Glow
Member

New poem up! its called " Wonder"
@helix: ok, sounds good. thanks!
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6/2/2009 23:11:29   
Gianna Glow
Member

However, on other news. I have 2 new peoms up. Someday and A Life Unraveled
I will add them to the top later.

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 11/1/2009 21:42:12 >
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6/3/2009 3:25:46   
Helixi
Member

your link for A Life Unwravelled is broken and there is no link at the top of your poetry thread. Someday is good, if short, and A Life Unwravelled is really good.



< Message edited by Helixi -- 1/8/2012 11:32:25 >
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6/3/2009 8:42:11   
BrantePyrus
Member

Green, I like the new ones, but they're not as good as some of your other stuff. And I look forward to reading your response. BTW, check my thread, new poems up, A Plea, and Brink. I want your reviews.

^ helix, whaddaya mean, claimed? I thought only AKs could do that.. *evil plot in progress*
Vampires are overrated...
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6/3/2009 12:04:53   
Gianna Glow
Member

lol, yay! A vampire page... though this whole thread is one because its owned by me. mwahahahahaha! anyways, i'll go check out that link.

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 6/3/2009 12:48:49 >
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6/3/2009 12:28:57   
BrantePyrus
Member

Hey, green, please claim my thread! for the... whatevers! Just so long as it's not vampires! Actually, page claiming is not allowed.
And the DBR helmet is watching you.(this is artwork I drew a bit ago)


Let's make that a link, please.

quote:

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Title banners are restricted by the same regulations that we utilize for forum signatures: 500x100 px and a maximum size of 50kb. This means that general Gallery banners may be too large for L&L titles.

Illustrations should be of reasonable size (at the discretion of the forum staff) and have a maximum file size of 100kb.

Animated images may not be embedded under any circumstances.

The maximum number of images embedded in any story is six. Beyond this you need to use links instead.

- Cow Face

Alright, my bad. *nods* That's true. My slipup.

< Message edited by BrantePyrus -- 6/3/2009 13:11:12 >
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