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5/3/2010 13:08:24   
superjars
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This is my first attempt at epic poetry. This is my submission for the Book of War project and I would appreciate any comments and criticism you might have! Oh, and it is a work in progress, so it will be added to as I work on each Act inside it. :D

< Message edited by superjars -- 5/17/2010 14:48:55 >
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5/3/2010 15:08:09   
superjars
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Prologue

Grant, O Muse, the words to your humble servant
to describe these terrible events, these great wars
which plague mankind and force from them
every ounce of strength and resolve. If only I
may express to all the pain of this event, then
we may one day be freed from this bondage
to hate and anger, which so darkens our souls.

The betrayal of the great knight, Balmath, was
the turning point of the entire affair. It was not
long after this event that Balmath was transformed
from the noble man, who was champion for good, to
fury incarnate, the loyal servant to the Great Cataclysm.

And this, O Muse, is where I begin my tale.
Grant that the lessons learned that fateful day
may reach a thousand ears,
be spoken upon a thousand lips,
and change a thousand lives
by their powerful example.

< Message edited by superjars -- 5/17/2010 14:37:55 >
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5/14/2010 17:04:47   
superjars
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Betrayal

"Men, upon my word, there be nothing else more satisfying
than returning from a great battle, victorious,
with friends by your side and good drink and food
to feast upon to celebrate the day of your return."

The words of mighty Balmath, champion of the King,
echoed through the hall, reaching to the ear of all
who gathered to feast the victory over the armies
of evil, of The Great Cataclysm.

A cheer went up, men and women all, excited and proud
that their young women and men had returned
with victory on their lips and blood on their swords;
with pride in their hearts and a lilt in their step.
The wounded, they carried, through the doors of the keep,
giving them to the nurses and doctors who would tend
to their wounds.

"Less than last time we went out! Pray, I tell you the truth,
while the enemy fought harder than ever they have before,
your sons and daughters fought even harder still.
We drove them back, 'til they turned in fear and ran
and while they may be back on the morrow or perhaps
the day after that, they have seen our power, our poise,
our valor and our skill, and the fear in their hearts will be their defeat."

Mighty Balmath, champion of the King, with these words still fresh
in his mouth, sat down to eat and drink with his men, making sure
that all from greatest to least, shared in the bounty and had their fill.
The brave knight Garsten, his second in command.
Sir Ganst, the slayer of dragons.
His brother, Garmol, a fierce warrior in his own right.
Pafsian the Valorous, Knight of the Holy Order.
Garth the Large, lover of food and fighting.
Faccio, an ex-assassin and mercenary-for-hire.
Squire Fastio, who bore mighty Balmath's shield.
And Squire Suall, son of the King himself, apprenticing with mighty Balmath.

These men, fierce warriors and brothers, one to another
sat and ate, late into the night, telling tales of battles
old and new. As the last of the day turned into night, still the drink
and food came, men gorging their appetites until they were full.

Late at night, the men were finally snoring away,
pleasant dreams filling their minds from the victory
that they had won that day. But there was one
who was not asleep; one who had not drunk until
his senses were dull and Sleep took him into her hold.

The fingers of Sleep spread over those gathered in the
hall, easing their minds and carrying their dreams in her
hair. She pulled the small baubles that held the dreams
and broke them upon the men, a faint, sweet smell
sifting through the hall, pleasing and soothing.

But when she came upon Garsten, the brave knight,
there were no baubles for her to grab or break.
She could not lay a finger on him, nor even approach
him at all. Tears formed in her eyes and she began to shake,
baubles falling around her, and breaking on the floor,
sending up clouds of foul-smelling gas, pulling those asleep
into nightmares and horrors.

For in the man's eyes, the glimpse straight into his soul,
she saw a malevolence not seen for a long time, one she
had encountered several times before. The malevolence
which streamed from The Great Cataclysm, who rejected
Sleep many years ago, and was never visited by her again.
Sleep fled from that place, leaving a trail of corrupted
and broken dreams in her wake, baubles falling and breaking
all around her as she did.

Garsten, the second in command, brave knight and beloved friend,
slowly got up from the hall that night, taking special care that he
not awake his brothers in arms, and stole out of the keep.
The plan was in motion and the trap had been laid, all to bring
the destruction of Mighty Balmath, champion of the King.

< Message edited by superjars -- 5/17/2010 14:38:57 >
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5/17/2010 12:07:51   
superjars
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Discovery

The sun rose slowly, the chariot of the sky riding out before the
clouds, lighting the hall and rousting the fierce warriors from
their troubled sleep. As they arose, sleep pushed from eyes,
armor gathered and donned, weapons sharpened and stored,
the men noticed that their leader, Mighty Balmath, champion
of the King, was nowhere to be found. They searched throughout
the keep, but no one knew where he was. The men assembled,
coming together to find out what to do next, but even Garsten,
the second in command, was not to be found.

"Gentlemen, worry not. I am sure that we will hear from our
leaders soon enough, either from a messenger, or their very
mouths. Perhaps they have left to do some early morning
training, before returning to take us into battle. Let us also
prepare to meet them with some training of our own!"

The men gave a mighty cry, and broke into groups, training their
bodies for the coming battles, without full knowledge of what was
happening only leagues from where they stood.

A messenger had come in the last moments of twilight, before
any of the men had risen with the sun. "Ho, Mighty Balmath,
champion of the King, I come bearing sad news. Garsten, the
brave knight, has been seen heading towards the enemy in the
deep of the night, when all others were sleeping. He was seen
only an hour ago, and I was dispatched with all speed to come
and inform you of this treachery."

Without a word, Mighty Balmath rose to his feet, forsaking his
armor and taking hold of Devastation, his mighty axe, and ran
from the hall, moving in the direction that the messenger had
indicated. He ran and ran through the pre-dawn light, limbs
set afire from the strain, body flowing over the landscape as he
pursued his friend, to find out where his treachery came from.

He came crashing through the underbrush and out into the sun,
faced with a most horrendous sight: his second in command,
grinning madly down at him, standing to the side of his worst
enemy, The Great Cataclysm.

"What is this, Garsten. Do you ally yourself with our hated enemy,
the scourge of all that we hold dear in this world? How can you
join her, after all we have seen? After all of the devastation she
has caused during this war, the people she has killed, the lives
she has destroyed? Explain yourself, my friend!"

"Can't you see, Balmath, or are you blind as well? As hard as
we have fought, she perseveres still. We cannot win this war.
The Queen of the Everlasting, The Great Cataclysm, she will
not be deterred from her goal; she will never give up. And if we
serve her, we can live for all time, just as she does."

The words haunted Mighty Balmath's mind, feeling wrong in
some way, weak words from a strong man, empty words from
a man so full of feeling. He knew that it was not him who spoke,
but the spawn of the devil who accompanied him.

"Lo, Queen of Nothing, do you seek to defeat the grand army of
Ravenshreich with naught but lies and ill-gotten servants. I know
you control Garsten's mind and make him to speak as he does.
the words he says are not his own, but only your fowl spittle
dripping from his mouth. Release him, you evil cur and prepare
to bring your armies to bear, as we will crush the spirit from
your men and leave you with nothing!"

"Ah, you fool. If only it were that easy. He is mine now, in body
and mind, and the only way I will release him is if I have another
to replace him. You, perhaps." The woman's face twisted into a grin
of evil glee, her face dark and haunting.

"I will never become your slave! Instead, I will destroy you and free
my friend from your evil grip!" Mighty Balmath, champion of the King,
fool that he was, hoisted his axe to his shoulder and rushed at the pair,
a loud, bellowing cry ripping from his lungs. He swung his axe hard,
bringing it around at the Queen, but bit into nothing but air. He had
been aiming a killing blow, to sever the woman in half, but when he
arrived with the strike there was nothing to hit. The Queen had laid
her trap and he had walked straight into it.

But the power of his strike carried it onwards. It swung past where
the evil woman had stood and towards Garsten, who moved not an
inch at its approach. The axe bit deep into his side, cleaving him
open from side to side. Mighty Balmath fought with his blade to halt
its course, but nothing swayed it from its intended path. After shearing
straight through, the blade's momentum ceased, hanging lifelessly
in Balmath's mighty hands.

Garsten fell over backwards, life pouring out of him. Blood gurgled
from his lips, words struggling to surface, his face etched with pain
and agony, yet serene at the same time. "Balmath, old friend,
thank you for releasing me from that evil witch. You were right.
Those were not my words, but hers that came from my mouth.
Defeat her. Destroy her. Finish this war for all who have perished.
For all who have fal--"

< Message edited by superjars -- 5/17/2010 14:39:15 >
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5/17/2010 14:39:25   
superjars
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Desecration

Garsten's words fell upon deaf ears. Crushed by the twins,
Sorrow and Despair, who attacked him as his friend lay dying,
Balmath didn't even see the figure creeping up on him, reaching
out to lay a hand upon his shoulder. Dark energy coursed into
his body, pain spreading from the point of contact out towards
his extremities. Mighty Balmath struggled, but Sorrow and Despair,
allies of the witch, held him fast, their crushing weight more than
enough to keep him there.

Black tendrils began to spread into his skin, threading in and out,
creeping from his shoulders down to his spine. There they fuse
and begin growing outward, threading through the skin, in and out,
until they start weaving into Sorrow and Despair. Both cry in panic,
but are quickly hushed by the threads, which transform them into
weapons, Sorrow a sword and Despair an axe, linked together with
Mighty Balmath for all time.

The transformation continued on, with the Queen watching intently.
Covered in black, from his head to his toe, barely recognizable as
Balmath any more, he rises to his feet, hefting Sorrow and Despair
on each of his shoulders, speechless and brooding, standing tall,
towering over the witch standing before him.

"Come, my new pet, and let us bring sorrow and despair to all of
our enemies. We shall rain down destruction upon their heads,
blood shall run over the earth and I shall be Queen of Everything!"
The witch cackled with glee and strode off, poor Balmath stumbling
slowly behind her, defeated and drained, with no will of his own
with which to fight. Off they walked to gather the armies of the
witch and march on Ravenshreich, to defeat their foes.

< Message edited by superjars -- 5/17/2010 16:08:01 >
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5/17/2010 16:14:42   
superjars
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Epilogue

O Muse, I thank you for the words to tell this hurtful tale,
to show how brash actions and betrayal can topple the
strongest of adversaries. This was a turning point in the
war; one which extended it for many more years before
it was able to be turned back. But that is a story for another
time and another place. So now I leave you, with these visions
of war and slaughter and the reminder of the cost all of those
things have on the human heart.

A cost that may never be paid.
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